Reviews for I'll Never Take Advantage
MollysSister | 2005.12.01 - 09:59PM | 2: Minerva's Crusade | Signed |
thank you so much for killing Ron off. I loath his character in almost every fiction I have ever read. Except for one by Hayseed. There is always an exception. I enjoyed the Minerva POV. Will you bounce from character to character's POV as each chapter progresses? I like the different perspectives
Author's Response: I think Ron is really hard to write and make non-one-dimensional. I'd actually like to do a deep!Ron fic at some point, after I've refined my character development skills. Unfortunately, he's just a plot device here...Thanks for reviewing! |
MollysSister | 2005.12.01 - 09:52PM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
ewwww it too me a few paragraphs to figure out what was going on. Very creepy and a bit sqeaky all at the same time. I tried to get a mental picture of Snape saying your words and i couldnt quite picture it. I'll keep trying though. Will she wake up tomorrow? Only one way for me to find out. Read on!
Author's Response: It squicked a lot of people at first...it does get lighter, though, as more points of view creep in and time advances. Thanks for hanging in and I hope you like it better as it progresses! Annie |
Maggie | 2005.12.01 - 01:37PM | 5: Journalistic Integrity | Signed |
Excellent!
Author's Response: Thank you! |
KellyRoxton | 2005.11.30 - 10:37PM | 5: Journalistic Integrity | Signed |
Oh my goodness what love in those words... Great writting on your part I really could see Ginny writting that.. Isn't she part of the order?? I wish the Grangers would have signed that letter or perhaps you have on planned for them to write to professor snape??? Great Job... Keep up the good work... looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: She is part of the Order, but she is still a Hogwarts student. She's also Harry's wife and the mother of his future child (although the world doesn't know about that). That's why she didn't use her full name. I'm glad you liked this chapter! Annie |
ebolafan | 2005.11.30 - 06:53PM | 5: Journalistic Integrity | Signed |
Just wonderful! This is am amazing tale, and I look forward to the next chapter anxiously. I love the duelling articles, and how the Order is rallying around Hermione.
~Jen (Potion Mistress)
Author's Response: Thank you! (It's not just Hermione they are rallying around, although she is the excuse...) Annie |
Adara | 2005.11.30 - 05:54PM | 5: Journalistic Integrity | Signed |
Very intersting. I look forward to reading how this story develops.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it...I'll update again soon! Annie |
Caeria | 2005.11.30 - 08:52AM | 5: Journalistic Integrity | Signed |
The story gets better and more interesting with each chapter. Loved the outside view of Hermione and Snape's relationship from Ginny. Her commentary also answered a few questions I had. Well done.
Author's Response: I'm glad you are liking it! Thanks! Annie |
GinnyW | 2005.11.30 - 07:01AM | 5: Journalistic Integrity | Signed |
I like the way that this is written. I look forward to more updates.
Author's Response: I'll probably submit the next chapter this week-end, so look for another update soon! I'm glad you're enjoying this...thanks for reviewing! Annie |
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