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| Arachnae | 2005.11.23 - 04:21PM | 4: An Unaccustomed Correspondent | Signed |
| You're doing great! Don't stop now!! Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry, I'll finish it! | |||
| ankka | 2005.11.23 - 02:28PM | 2: Minerva's Crusade | Signed |
| i think its brilliant!
i' haven't hung arounfd here for a while, so i'm more than happy i opened this story first when having a look at ashwinder.
please continue in this wellthoughtout way... we already learned so much about the characters now!
Author's Response: I'm glad you are liking it. I'm enjoying dropping these little hints about stuff that has happened (I tend to over-write, so this has been a good discipline for me). And welcome back! | |||
| thesculptress | 2005.11.23 - 01:25PM | 4: An Unaccustomed Correspondent | Signed |
| So happy to see yet another chapter (and sorry I didn't review earlier; I've been out of town!) Author's Response: I'll try to keep them coming regularly. Some fight me more than others... | |||
| Issakins | 2005.11.23 - 12:22PM | 4: An Unaccustomed Correspondent | Signed |
| wow...this story is great! I'm speechless! It's so original and brilliant. Wow. Keep writing and update soon! I mean really really soon!:) Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on the next chapter; I should have it ready for submission next week. Annie | |||
| Starkeen | 2005.11.23 - 10:03AM | 4: An Unaccustomed Correspondent | Signed |
| You've really done a thorough job with crafting this story. Multiple perspectives are usually considered a challenge, but you handle them gracefully, and your choice in primarily using an epistolary form is very effective. Your prose was prone to chatty exposition at the beginning, but with each successive chapter it's getting more and more fluid. Very interesting choice of curses, too! I can't wait to keep reading! Author's Response: Thank you! The level of chattiness will vary with the mode of presentation, I suspect...when people are speaking to a silent listener, they tend to try to fill the void. I'll post again soon...Annie | |||
| Johann | 2005.11.23 - 10:02AM | 4: An Unaccustomed Correspondent | Signed |
| I am really enjoying the little peeks you are giving us! I can't wait to read Hermione's POV again and find out just what made her have that little magic temper tantrum. I guess she has her emotions back now, too! Author's Response: Thank you! I like your characterization of it as peeks...that's exactly how it's working out. It's fun seeing what people pick up on, too. | |||
| Potions_Mistress | 2005.11.23 - 09:58AM | 4: An Unaccustomed Correspondent | Signed |
| Lovely work. Update Soon! Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying to find the right tone for Ginny. An update will follow soon...Annie | |||
| Subversa | 2005.11.23 - 09:43AM | 4: An Unaccustomed Correspondent | Signed |
| Severus is already looking for a way to get out with his dignity intact, if the need should arise, bless him! It sounds as if the Lupins live at Grimauld Place? Does Harry live there too? I would love to have heard all about the china-breaking incident. More, my dear, more! Author's Response: Yes, he is, poor baby. It's hopeless, of course. Meanwhile, 12 Grimmauld Place is home base for both the Potters and the Lupins, at least while Ginny is still in school. I'm glad you are liking this! | |||
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