Reviews for I'll Never Take Advantage
Sooz | 2005.05.30 - 10:14AM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
Annie, I don't have and con-crit to give to you, but I did like the story. His dialogue shows him to be kind and thoughtful. I would love it if you found a way to continue this.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm finding that he's kind and thoughtful to Hermione only, although he's somewhat better than the Evil Potions Master to everyone else. Which is okay...I'd hate to lose our Snarky Snape! Annie |
Gallagher | 2005.05.30 - 10:07AM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
Beautifully written.
I hope she can hear him.
I hope she wakes up and remembers what she heard.
It seems to be a hope invoking piece.
I hope you continue.
~Rhiannon
Author's Response: I'm so glad the hope came through. I didn't want it to be just sad (although it's that, too). There is at least one follow-up in the works. Thanks for reviewing...Annie |
EXECUTR | 2005.05.30 - 09:54AM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
Good story. It has potential. How about elaborating by adding another chaopter?
Author's Response: Your wish...my command. It should be ready for submission this week-end. I'm glad you liked my fic! Annie |
SiriusLives689 | 2005.05.30 - 09:47AM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
Very Interesting start. ~ angela
Author's Response: Thank you! Annie |
Diotima Mantinea | 2005.05.30 - 09:45AM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
It would be interesting to find out if the potion worked. It would also be interesting if Hermione remembered everything.
Just a thought
Author's Response: I'm working on the follow-up...all shall be revealed in time. I'm glad you enjoyed it; it means a lot that people want to know more...Annie |
selened | 2005.05.30 - 09:35AM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
This is unusual. I'll be interested to see how you choose to develop it.
Author's Response: Thank you! It's developing itself, I'm afraid; I'm just trying to make it fit the form. Thanks for your encouragement and I'm glad you find it intriguing! Annie |
ForMeAndMy2Girls | 2005.05.30 - 09:33AM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
I'm still crying. Great soft story. I love it.
Author's Response: Wow...don't cry! There's hope...Annie |
greekgoddess18 | 2005.05.30 - 09:25AM | 1: I'll Never Take Advantage | Signed |
Wow! That was such a great begining to a story. I can't wait for the next installment to find out what happens to her. I hope she wakes up and eventually stays with him, it seems as if he really truly cares for her. Thanks for starting this awesome story!
Author's Response: Thanks! There is definitely more to come...Annie |
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