Reviews for I'll Never Take Advantage
| ExperimentalMe | 2009.03.25 - 06:43PM | 7: The Anniversary Song | Signed |
| Great story and well written. |
| verasuspense | 2008.09.22 - 02:43PM | 2: Minerva's Crusade | Signed |
| I think Remus is "aware of the injustice we all perpetrated on this man", since he was one of the perpetrators. His attitude towards Severus in canon always struck me as guilt-ridden: the almost desperate politeness, the emphasis on calling him by his first name "Thank you, Severus. Thank you." etc |
| Bubblespike2 | 2008.06.04 - 11:51PM | 7: The Anniversary Song | Signed |
| What interesting magic! I especially like the idea that there's a spell that can make the magic visible. The format you used--various letters or journal entries--was very effective as well. |
| JordanneLeigh | 2008.03.10 - 06:09PM | 7: The Anniversary Song | Signed |
| I love it! The whole thing! It's marevelous! Especially the un-casting scene! I'm sure that was the hardest to write, and make work in the way you wanted. It was great! |
| adelgado | 2008.02.24 - 12:59AM | 7: The Anniversary Song | Signed |
| Loved it am going to check for a sequil |
| JunoMagic | 2008.02.13 - 08:46PM | 7: The Anniversary Song | Signed |
| I have to admit that this is a let-down as a last chapter. In my opinion, it doesn't do the story and its emotional tension justice. I can see the reason for telling this chapter that way, but as a final chapter of this story, it doesn't work for me at all. There is no resolution, I feel left hanging in the air, with no glimpse of either Hermione or Severus. |
| JunoMagic | 2008.02.13 - 08:37PM | 6: Tomorrow | Signed |
| Poor Severus. That has to be so hard on him. |
| JunoMagic | 2008.02.13 - 07:36PM | 5: Journalistic Integrity | Signed |
| Umbridge is - for fanfic writers at least - the best thing since sliced bread. Rita Skeeter is just as useful. Both are employed very skillfully in this chapter. |
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