Ashwinder :: To bewitch the mind and ensnare the senses

Reviews for A Knock On The Door

DarkAngel0123	2005.09.12 - 01:12AM	1: A Knock On The Door	Signed
That was very intelligent writing. But to tellyou the truth, if I knew you, personally(and take know offense at this)I would strangle you for that ending. Your writin did give me some thoughts of my own though. For until I read this(no matter what anyone could, or would possibly say) I wouldn't have or thought myself capable of believing Snape innocent. Youv'e given me a new perspective to this and some thoughts to sleep on. Thank You. Oh and by the way you spelled apologize wrong-just so you know. Author's Response: Phew! Well, I'm glad I wrote this from the safety of the net, rather than show it to you in person! I'm glad to have made you think about Sev and his innocence re Dumbledore. I feel I've done some good here! btw I haven't spelt apologise wrong - I am British and it's the way we spell it. We don't use as many Zs as you do in the US. Lol. Thanks so much for your review.

gwenandromeda	2005.09.11 - 12:47PM	1: A Knock On The Door	Signed
HEY! No ending it there! ::growl:: Well, your theories are certainly interesting. I can't say I agree with them...except perhaps the theory that Snape liked Lilly. But nonetheless, this was well-written. Author's Response: Well, I realised that not everyone would agree with theories; I just wanted to air them, get them off my chest. You know how it is. Thanks for reviewing. Lol.

tiamai	2005.09.11 - 11:59AM	1: A Knock On The Door	Signed
huh. the potion... i did think there was quite a bit of fuss made about that potion... and though i think that snape is, as yet, undecided in where his loyalties lie, i do think he had dumbleodres permission to kill him. lots to think about... and good bit of filth there too! Author's Response: Something was wrong with the potion, whether my theory is correct or not. You think Snape is undecided? I think he knows exactly what he's doing - it's just us poor loyal sods who are kept in the dark. Glad you liked the dirty bits! Thanks for reviewing. Lol.

spitfirecrackre

2005.09.11 - 08:32AM

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Cripes! This ought to be given a disclaimer stating something along the lines of
"This may cause you to react with much anger to the yet-unnamed Book 7. The plot contained herein is not to be blamed for any delusions suspended by the reader."

Seriously though? This was GREAT. The smut was steamy and the way you wrote it, I felt I was watching a movie that opening with the monochromatic scene where Snape opens the door, blahblahblah, has Hermione by her throat. Then colour will flood the scene and a quick zoom to Hermione's face with dilating pupils then.............er. ok. I seem to have become a little carried away. LOL.

Thanks much for this and I'm off to see if you've written others!

Author's Response: I shall consider adding that disclaimer, then! I seem to have brought out the film director in you. Like your ideas. Thanks for an enjoyable review. Lol.

DarkAspiration	2005.09.11 - 07:40AM	1: A Knock On The Door	Signed
Bugger!! It was beautifully written and so well plotted !! shouts -SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!!!! - Author's Response: 'Beautifully written' makes my day - thank you. No sequel planned. Sorry. Lol.

Somber	2005.09.11 - 06:46AM	1: A Knock On The Door	Anonymous
ooohh....i can't believe you ended it there...lol...very good, i loved it. Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Lol.

ladycplum	2005.09.10 - 10:09PM	1: A Knock On The Door	Signed
DOH!!!!!!! Can't you at least think about giving us a bit more?????? This was amazing, but my imagination's not good enough to think about who's at the door!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: You mean you want me to tell you who's at the door? What if I don't know? It could be Voldie, Harry or the Aurors. Or perhaps it's Ron, come to fight for his woman... Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Lol.

Equipoise	2005.09.10 - 09:34PM	1: A Knock On The Door	Signed
That was incredible. I don't think he's a 'bad guy' either and you have a really fantastic explanation here. Well written too. Oh, and I love the sexual tension. This is one of my favorite short stories ever. Author's Response: I don't care if I am way off with my take on things, as long as JK makes Sev the good guy. He has to be; just has to be. Thanks for your review. Flattered that mine is one of your favourites. Lol.

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