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ALANRICKMANFAN212010.05.03 - 04:22PM2: 2. EnlightenedSigned
and what is a Mage???

Author's Response: The story kinda explains the concept :)

ALANRICKMANFAN212010.05.03 - 04:20PM2: 2. EnlightenedSigned
why in chapter 2 in this story does it say in http://ashwinder.sycophanthex.com/viewstory.php?sid=22937&i=1 it says at the end of the chapter (and in the next chapter too it seems it says it too) it says this at the end of it: Well, if that was not anticlimactic, Hermione did not know what was. and why doesnt it say it in chapter 2 AT ALL in the same story in http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5807544/2/The_Mage it doesnt say in chapter 2 AT ALL!! Well, if that was not anticlimactic, Hermione did not know what was but instead says in the next chapter instead ONLY unlike in story http://ashwinder.sycophanthex.com/viewstory.php?sid=22937&i=1 ????? WHY???

Author's Response: Um... because? Because I couldn't decide which way is better. I don't think it changes the plot or layout all that much, only the dramatic effect a little.

grizelda2010.05.03 - 04:19PM5: 5. EducatedSigned
Hooray! Another brilliant chapter. I really loved how the majority was humerous so that the really scary bit at the end is really unexpected. Snape clearly wasn't joking when he said she could cost them their lives. Looking forward to reading more as always...

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and leaving me a note! It means a lot to me. And there's certainly more to come :)

Leraiv Snape2010.04.29 - 05:56PM4: 4. DisappointedSigned
Fascinating first meeting - Snape-as-Mage is looking like a very different character than Snape-as-Potions-professor? Cheers to the Pinky and the Brain reference!

Author's Response: Thank you for giving me your thoughts! I've always thought there was much more to Snape than his teching persona, JKR only let us see glimpses of that, and I'll try to explore thisfully. Oh and yay to Pinky and the Brain! I love them :)

MollysSister2010.04.27 - 11:33PM4: 4. DisappointedSigned
"how to be a Mage for dummies" LOL! I guess I can understand Severus' point. It must be offensive to train someone who doesnt understand a single thing. Going to visit Forge seems like a great idea. A registry of Mages? Can I get that on amazon.com??? This is all so facinating. I am litterally on the edge of my seat for more chapters. Go girl!

Author's Response: Hee, thank you! Yes, I agree, patience is not Severus's forte, so it shoudl be interesting to see him put up with Herms. And we know she can be soo annoyingly Gryffidor!

MollysSister2010.04.27 - 11:19PM3: 3. ConfusedSigned
"it is never those who would outright want to use you or mean you ill that end up using you in the most destructive ways" Well that is a sobering thought! I am glad Hermione nailed Dumbledore with her question if he was trying to use her as well. It has the sharp point of truth on it. I want Hermione to get answers to all her questions and now! Mostly because I have the very same questions. Forge??? Go on!

Author's Response: I think we might see this all who uses who situation come into play later. Does that sound enticing? ;)) Hermione definitely will have her questions answered pronto. Except that the answers might poe even more questions. :) Thank you very much for letting me know your thoughts.

MollysSister2010.04.27 - 11:04PM2: 2. EnlightenedSigned
I love love love all your new magic of what a mage is!! I am very worried about Severus verbally abusing Hermione during their private sessions. He can be such a jerk. I dont want him to take it out on Hermione. She doesnt seem mentally strong enough to put up with his bullshit. Oh I am worried!

Author's Response: That he certainly can be. However, I think Hemion is not exactly a clawless kitten herself, so I think some delicious clashing of wills is to look forward to :)

Blondiebear2010.04.26 - 09:37AM4: 4. DisappointedSigned
Am still loving this story! You're writing style is fantastic and very readable... you story is original and engaging... and your characters are so canon. Snape is fantastic and so very Snape like! *sigh* Am eagerly awaiting your next update.

Author's Response: Thank you! *hugs* your support is very inspiring :) I hope the story will remain up to your standards, I'll certinly do my best.

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