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| Firewall | 2010.05.04 - 09:30PM | 5: 5. Educated | Signed |
| A lovely blend of humour, suspense and magic. I'll look forward to the next chapter. Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very happy that you liked it. | |||
| MsTree | 2010.05.04 - 07:49PM | 5: 5. Educated | Signed |
| I love the twins. Always entertaining. But how did Draco know? Author's Response: Hee, thank you :) I love them two and there will be more of them. Draco's little failed plan will be revealed, I promise. | |||
| midnyteshadow | 2010.05.04 - 04:08PM | 5: 5. Educated | Signed |
| I have only just come across your story and I am enjoying it thoroughly! I can't wait for the next chapter!
All the best! Author's Response: Thank you so very much! It's always so great to hear from new readers. Best wishes to you too, hope you keep reading. | |||
| jeweliux | 2010.05.04 - 03:25PM | 5: 5. Educated | Signed |
| oh yeah, the lovely Loki twins are finally here and as always brilliant :) I'm really happy that they are so lively and beautifully written, the whole interaction with Hermione was perfect! Frizzball incident was so funny to imagine :) I was smiling through the whole chapter. Except of course the ending - so much tension there.. Snape is being his usual snapeish self, I think for him it is normal to expect that she should follow his orders, not throw a tantrum. Yeah, it is irritating to wait in the cold, but seeing as he came not from the castle, it should have been clear to her that something happened and Snape is not one who could easily trust anyone with important information. Also, if he warned her, she might have panicked or tried to do something rash/heroic/stupid - Gryffindors anyone? I always thought that being the brains of the Golden Trio did also mean that the same rashness is in her too, not only in Harry and Ron (more diluted, but it is still here).
So for me the whole situation is very understandable. Thankfully, Hermione realised that too, though only after the incident with Malfoys. But it is normal, because she still has trust issues with Snape and they are bound to have some situations like that in the future, I think. Author's Response: Aww, thank you! Your reviews make me continuously giddy, writer's ego feels pleasantly stroked and muse's greedy stomach is full! I completely agree with your view on Snape and Hermione. They are in a situation where they have basically two choices, to ruin it or to adjust to each other. And they are both not exactly easily adjusting people, so, issues kicking in galore :))) | |||
| paddiew | 2010.05.04 - 01:09PM | 5: 5. Educated | Signed |
| Very interesting story. I like your concepts and characters (wonderful Forge) and look forward to your updates. Thank you for your work. Author's Response: Thank you very much! I certainly am happy that you like my sroty and hope to keep up with your expectations :) | |||
| Sampdoria | 2010.05.04 - 05:15AM | 5: 5. Educated | Signed |
| Thank you for a great update. I loved the owlery-scene, and the meeting with the twins were brilliant (next to killing Severus, I'll never forgive JKR for killing Fred). The interlude with Lucius and Draco made the plot even more interesting. But, in Hermiones defence I will say that while some questions can wait, only fools will blindly follow without asking some questions. Not at least because I myself would love to know the answears. It wouldn't have taken Severus more than mere secconds to make his houseelf tell Hermione that danger is lurking and that she should stay out of sigth and wait for him. That way they would probably have avoided what just happened. (I am not to fond of the idea that "adults" can tell the future and only "children" ask questions, thus belitteling Hermione for wanting answears) Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a thoughtful review! I totally agree about Hermkone. So far, her trust in Snape is more a leap of faith, I think, even though he had done nothing to undermime it in the past. But the fact that she will not follow orders blindly, I think I like it about her and he and Snape are going to have to work it out, between that ans Snape's teaching techniques. | |||
| madeleone | 2010.05.04 - 12:59AM | 5: 5. Educated | Signed |
| Oooh a new chapter, yay!
Loved the interaction with the twins. And I wonder what Lucius is up to and apparently trying to put Draco up to no good also.
Loved the closing line as well. Cant' wait for more! Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm so happy to see you reading :) Lucius certainly has an agenda and we will learn more about it very soon. | |||
| teatime | 2010.05.04 - 12:34AM | 5: 5. Educated | Signed |
| Interesting chapter. I really liked the dynamic between Hermione and Snape already. Thanks for the update. Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it and hope you'll keep reading. | |||
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