Reviews for The Mage
| jeweliux | 2010.08.06 - 06:17AM | 10: 10. Overflown | Signed |
| haha, that was brilliant! Very good lesson in my opinion, the points he raised when explaining the matter between trust and... trust, was spot on. Hermione really must work on that. And I think she will be different the next lesson, she will be prepared to trust her instincts more. As for her being such obedient and too trusting, no wonder - she still is a teenager, she still has almost no grown-up experience, so that doesn't surprise me and is in fact in character (at least in my opinion). Snape is in character too, but I've already told that a ten or so times in previous comments. :)
Lovely chapter. Blindfolding rocks! :)
By the way, I still giggle of the "Middler" :) |
| Sampdoria | 2010.08.06 - 02:50AM | 10: 10. Overflown | Signed |
| Thank you so much for the update, very well written as always. I love the plot, but I have to admit that I find Severus to be a lousy teacher. It is absolutely Severus though, I guess what annoys me most is "doormat" Hermione, him treating her as crap is one thing, for her to suck it up and long for his approval, that is another. A bit of spine would be appriciated. I guess I want her to do a "Umbrigde" on him, if not serve him to the centaurs, at least make sure he get a feel of her temper, he sure deserves it. He demands her respect, complete trust and obedience, and when getting it, he tells her what a idiotic person she is? Nope, he migth be Severus Snape, bastard Potions Master extraordinare, but that shouldn't make him go unpunished when he behaves like a tyrrant. |
| princessgraciemix3 | 2010.08.06 - 02:14AM | 10: 10. Overflown | Signed |
| lol love the less destruction more pretty part of her explosion. More please! Can she keep the Dodo? |
| Mikimoto | 2010.08.06 - 01:01AM | 10: 10. Overflown | Signed |
| Was that his voice in her head or something else? |
| PsycheMaia | 2010.08.05 - 09:30PM | 10: 10. Overflown | Signed |
| Aww... love the Dodo. So very Hermione for her to bring back some defenseless creature! I love Snape's dialog - typical him with all of the snark! |
| verasuspense | 2010.08.05 - 09:24PM | 10: 10. Overflown | Signed |
| Is she taking the Dodo back to Hogwarts, or will she leave it with Hagrid ? |
| Yukimor | 2010.08.05 - 09:20PM | 10: 10. Overflown | Signed |
| I fell over laughing. Poor dodo.
“Yes, you ridiculous witch. That is your monstrous attacker. A magical Dodo. Ugly as sin, but one of the most harmless and pathetically affectionate creatures known to wizardkind. You were perfectly safe. It just wanted to make friends. Though, I must admit, it worked perfectly for the fear factor in your overflow.” Brilliant. You've got his snarky personality down pat. Well done and well written... XD
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| Fizzabella | 2010.08.05 - 09:11PM | 10: 10. Overflown | Signed |
| Um... I don't think a magical Dodo qualifies as the cat, owl or toad that students are allowed to bring to Hogwarts.
This is lovely:)
Warm regards,
Fizzabella |
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