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princessgraciemix32010.05.03 - 09:52PM5: 5. EducatedSigned
Yay for the update. Poor Hermione nothing seems to want to workout for her tonight. Hopefully the meeting will go better. More please

Author's Response: Thank you for continuous support! :) More's definitely coming up.

roosickle2010.05.03 - 09:41PM5: 5. EducatedSigned
woooohoooo! I did a happy dance when I saw the update !LOL great update, Lucius is and ass , don't you think? Fred and George have always been favourites of mine, do you find them hard to write? Great mix of humor to drama , hoping to see how this midwife pans out next chapter : )

Author's Response: Lucuis is certainly an ass! :) (but, oh, a magnificent one, lol) And I totally hear you on Fred and George. Thank you for reviewing and the meeting with the Midwife is coming up next.

Green Aurora2010.05.03 - 09:26PM5: 5. EducatedSigned
Woo! another update! Do you plan on making a particular day of the week "Your Day" or are your enthusiastic fans only to be aware of "once a week" for updating? I mean, I've been checking pretty consistently, but it helps to know I have something to look forward to... great chapter, eager for more. Btw, you nailed Fred/George speech, and I LOVE that they have a house elf that admires them enough to have red hair.

Author's Response: Aww, I'm so greatful for this review :) the thought that I might already have 'enthusiastic fans' is absolutely ego-tickling. I'm thinking on making it a Monday, but I have to say that sometimes it takes a few hours for the story to pop here, sometimes it can be a couple of days and sometimes I'm just not careful enough with my commas and it gets sent back for correcting. But I'm trying to do my best to stick to the schedule. Like I said, the story's bulk is written. I"m brushing it up and having it beta'd and adding a few things here and there. So, it will be posted. And thank you for appreciating my little elf :))

Nerdlee2010.05.03 - 08:39PM5: 5. EducatedSigned
Glumbumble nest wins you this genuine, made up actual award for best Narglizer and Snorkack maker upperer. This was a wonderfully joyous read. I can't tell you how happy it makes me to have found this story and get to read it. Thank you so much for your ridiculously exceptional writing. You are my new "The Problem With Purity" fix. ~Mia

Author's Response: Aww, I'm seriously blushing here, you know? :) I wish I could claim the Laurels for the Glumbumble invention, but I can't, it is an actual item in "Fantastic beasts and where to find them", by JKR. An insect that makes melancholy treacle :) And thank you for PWP comparison, it is very flattering, I loved that story too.

browneyes2yu2010.05.03 - 07:59PM5: 5. EducatedSigned
Sorry, forgot to mention something. I also loved the Owlery bit - simply beautiful in a haunting way. I can imagine Hermione eascaping there for some quiet time and when the Library became too predictable a place to run to. But my favorite line in the chapter is this one: "The owlet offered its leg haughtily and took off, still screeching, as soon as the weird, bushy-feathered human, who tended to fall asleep with her eyes open and glued to a stack of paper worthy only of a good nibbling, took her post." I laughed my head off, ok, more like snickered but it WAS funny and SO Hermione - that birdlet ^^ really got it right in a funny birdie way. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you again! :)) Like I said, I have a weakness for descriptions and elaborate settings. Sometimes, I get really carried away though :) and instead of 1500 words end up with 5000. Haha ))

browneyes2yu2010.05.03 - 07:53PM5: 5. EducatedSigned
Ok, when I saw that you updated I did a little silly dance and then went and got myself my favorite food (at the moment it was dumplings with fresh dill and rye bread) and settled to read your new chapter. You know, for me it's like a whole process, a ritual lol... Well, what can I tell you - I loved the chapter, first because the Twins and Hermione finally met and talked a bit about their shared 'afflction' lol and because you weaved such an exciting and enlightening finishing scene with Lucius/Draco and Hermione/Snape...However, I am still in the dark concerning Hermione's and Snape's types of Magery and it irks me! ^^* With Hermione, there are so many possibilities but they are all tied with knowledge, I think, printed knowledge and like 'ghost' knowledge (meaning, she reads between the lines, what is not written, the story behind the story, etc.)....with Snape, I am just confused - is he the author of the M book (several clues seem to point that way - he had the book, he doesn't like D-bore very much, etc.) He could be so many things! my mind boggles >,< Anyway, as always, you had me on the edge of the seat with my most pressing questions still remaining unanswered! You're an Evil Writer! <---your type of Magery, I guess. lol Thank you for this chapter though and I'll try not to expire from longing too much for a speedy update. Ciao~

Author's Response: Aww, dumplings with fresh dill. *drools* *dreams of frying them up with onions and drowning them in sour cream*. I think I might have to grab a pack of dumplings next time I go food-shopping. Thank you for your continuous support! It is extremely inspiring. I love, love, love how you theorise about Snape's and Hermione's Mage kinds :) It literally pains me to continue, but I havetohavetohaveto! *chants* be an Evil!Writer :))))))) Cheers to you and have a great day!

PsycheMaia2010.05.03 - 07:16PM5: 5. EducatedSigned
Oh goodness! New developments. Lucius already on the prowl. Severus does seem to be quite a good mentor if not a bit rough around the edges. I'm really curious to know what his specialty is! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Lucius is fast, isn't he? :)) When Snape's kind is revealed... I think you will be surprized. Well, I hope so, at least.

zanuda2010.05.03 - 05:24PM5: 5. EducatedSigned
Delightful. I was carried away by your picture of the Owlery - enchanting pictures are a speciality of yours. I wonder if somebody overheard Hermione's words to the twins. But I will definitely have to wonder til the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! :) Aww, I love the imagery in stories and can't resist descriptive plot bunnies :) And yes, not spoilering anything :)))

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