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| Amr | 2013.05.24 - 10:01AM | 34: Epilogue - I Think My Love As Rare | Signed |
| Very nice indeed, as always. I've enjoyed re-reading this story, and although I haven't noticed any of the changes you made in particular, the whole thing seems tighter and less frustrating than it was the first time--and I don't think it was because I knew how it would end, because I always knew how it would end, really. This epilogue is extremely satisfying, with lovely bits of humor (Moe expanding the wardrobes to allow for more knitting, Lance's hat, and Kitty's fascination with Severus's basket) leavening a solid, but believable happiness for both of our favorite protagonists. So, thank you for all your work writing and revising this, and congratulations on completing your task. I look forward to your next epic. Author's Response: Amr, thank you so very much. Coming from one of my absolute all-time favourite writers, that means a lot. I'm glad you found it tightened up - there was a lot more (40,000 words, to be precise) of them thinking about their feelings. A classic case of telling, not showing. I hope I got rid of much of that. Sincere thanks for your readership and your kind review. LB x | |||
| Suedahling | 2013.05.24 - 09:58AM | 34: Epilogue - I Think My Love As Rare | Signed |
| I am sitting here in tears! In my office! I hope no one comes in...Thank you for this lovely story. You have a way to get to the emotional heart of the natter. I enjoyed it tremendously. Thanks for sharing it with us. Author's Response: LOL. Many thanks for reading and reviewing, Sue. I'm so glad you liked it! LB x | |||
| Wintersong | 2013.05.24 - 09:52AM | 34: Epilogue - I Think My Love As Rare | Signed |
| Love, love, love it. I loved this story in the beginning and it's only gotten better now. This is the ending that Severus should have had in the books. Out of all the characters he was most deserving of a "happily ever after" and it always infuriated me that he didn't get it. Author's Response: Thank you again, winter. And yes, he did deserve a happy ending. LB x | |||
| prettychocolate | 2013.05.24 - 09:47AM | 34: Epilogue - I Think My Love As Rare | Signed |
| I'm so sad it's over! I loved this story. You did an amazing job taking us from the book relationship to a happy marriage. Beautiful plot development! Thanks for sharing it! Author's Response: Aw, thank you very much, pretty, for this and for all your kind reviews. LB x | |||
| takayuki | 2013.05.24 - 08:46AM | 34: Epilogue - I Think My Love As Rare | Signed |
| I love this couple . Thank you for a beautiful story. Author's Response: You're very welcome, and thanks for your review. LB x | |||
| Horserider | 2013.05.24 - 03:00AM | 33: Tread Softly | Signed |
| I can see why this was so hard to write...one word: AWESOME! Not quite a good enough description, but I loved it so we'll just have to leave it at that! Author's Response: Thank you, horse, for all your reviews over the weeks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. LB x | |||
| CheekyTart | 2013.05.23 - 04:05AM | 26: Your Wounded Stare | Signed |
| Not a god, but mortal man after all. Hmmm...it's actually refreshing that you've written Severus so human. Before all of the drama I had a few laughs with this chapter...sharing Narcissa's bday, the astrologist could have a field day with that one...and Aunt Jemima, I had a visual of the old pancake lady leaning over to Hermione. Hehehe! | |||
| Wintersong | 2013.05.22 - 05:57PM | 1: Decisions and Revisions | Signed |
| I've seen this one for a while and finally got around to opening it up to see. Needless to say I was thrilled when I realized it was one of my all time favorite stories. I was so disappointed when it was removed before and can't wait to read it all again. Welcome back!! | |||
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