Reviews for Denial
| iris m | 2013.05.16 - 10:33AM | 31: Sweet Unrest | Signed |
| OMG!!!!!!!! WOW... sorry but im lost for words...... wonderful chapter (smiles) you have made my day. |
| klara08 | 2013.05.16 - 04:26AM | 31: Sweet Unrest | Signed |
| Wow, I didn't expect Cordelia to give up so easily or even to suggest such an early date! It's great that that thing is resolved now. Please don't think of giving up on your original fiction! At least three people from publishing business said your novels are amazing, so that means they are and you are very close! Good luck! |
| bluemooonie | 2013.05.16 - 03:05AM | 31: Sweet Unrest | Signed |
| I don't think I ever finished this story your first go around. Really glad you have reposted . Keep writing -best wishes for you in your dreams and aspirations. |
| pragerr | 2013.05.16 - 01:31AM | 31: Sweet Unrest | Signed |
| “Ah, I think Severus could glare for Britain..." I'm still laughing as I write this!
I check the list of new submissions pretty frequently, hoping you've added another chapter -- thanks for this one. |
| Angelicminx | 2013.05.16 - 12:10AM | 31: Sweet Unrest | Signed |
| Sweet unrest is indeed the perfect title for this chapter!! I loved it, as usual, but I must say, I loved reading the author's note in the beginning even more! Please, don't give up on your writing! Such an incredible author should not give up fighting to have her works published! I rarely love reading the new literature that is out there, but your writing! I'd be drooling just to get my hands on it! You have an incredible gift illustrating a character's emotions. It feels so real that it is as if I am in the scene itself! Never give up!!!!
Incredible work, as always! Lots of luck in getting your work published! I know you can do it!!!! *hugs*
-Angie |
| Leraiv Snape | 2013.05.15 - 05:46PM | 31: Sweet Unrest | Signed |
| My second review is for 'Denial' itself. I was surprised in your Author's Note to see that many people are irritated with Hermione and Severus in this and the next chapters. I love Snape here. Much as Severus has shifted in the way he interacts with Hermione and others, he still has a history of baggage. The fact that he resorted to threats and blackmail with Cordelia, when Lance's love was clearly more effective, was a wonderful highlight of a flaw in Snape's character and an excellent way of underlining one of Rowling's major themes in canon. I really enjoy the interaction between Lance, Cordelia and Snape in this chapter. |
| Leraiv Snape | 2013.05.15 - 05:43PM | 31: Sweet Unrest | Signed |
| For my first review, I would like to address the explanation you tendered at the beginning of the chapter regarding taking down 'Denial'. I was very sorry to see the story go, but I fully respect the reasoning that went into removing and editing it before re-posting. I also want to say that I am sorry that the road has been so thorny in regards to publishing your own, original work. I would love to read anything that you have written. On that note, have you considered self-publishing? I have no idea if that's a no-no with an agent, but I would wager that you definitely have minimally a few hundred copies that would sell based on those of us who love reading you here. Good luck with publication, and if you ever release the title here, I will look for it. |
| Queen of Nightfever | 2013.05.15 - 05:10PM | 31: Sweet Unrest | Signed |
| Great chapter!
Also, I wholeheartedly wish you ALL THE BEST OF LUCK with your original novels. |
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