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Suedahling2013.03.15 - 02:18PM13: A Barbarous TongueSigned
OH-now this is getting even more interesting. Our hero and heroine together. Maybe Cordelia gets run over by a bus? Why did Severus marry her anyway?

Author's Response: Thanks, Sue. :) We'll learn lots more about Cordelia and Severus soon. LB x

verasuspense2013.03.15 - 02:02PM13: A Barbarous TongueSigned
Lance will probably react the way Severus predicts, but I'm not so sure about Cordelia. Theo is her precious only son, after all. Though however she feels in private , she will probably put a good face on things in front of the public.

Author's Response: You understand Cordelia very well. :) We will get to see her reaction in the next chapter, which I'll have up later today. LB x

Angelicminx2013.03.15 - 01:43PM13: A Barbarous TongueSigned
Woohoo! Yay, update! Such an incredible chapter! I love how very out-of-character Hermione is! And a very interesting take on Harry and Draco! Brilliant chapter, and can't wait for more, as usual!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. :) I'll have chapter 14 up for you later today. LB x

AussieWolf2013.03.15 - 02:20AM12: Without CeremonySigned
Please excuse my internet spaz attack but asffjsgfhgid it's you! Your story! THIS story! I remember reading it a couple of years ago and when I tried to find it again I was told the author took it down. Super excited to read it again in an updated and streamlined format! Thank you so much for taking the time to revise and repost, I look forward to reading the rest of it! :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks, Aussie! I hope you enjoy the improved version. :) LB x

cottontail2013.03.13 - 11:56AM12: Without CeremonySigned
The rings come back to haunt them as we all knew they would. She is unhappy at work so I wonder if Severus take her under his wing and lets her start working for him. Now there is a way for them to start looking at each other in a different light I'd say.

Author's Response: Indeed - very well spotted! :) LB x

Horserider2013.03.12 - 02:38PM12: Without CeremonySigned
Oh HELL no, I forgot what a problem the rings could pose...is Theo about to become a sadist?! When can we please have some more? I never got to read this the first time so I'm on pins and needles here!

Author's Response: Hehe. Yes, those rings could pose a lot of problems! LB x

jaemistoryteller2013.03.12 - 12:14PM12: Without CeremonySigned
Now does she remember the little problem of there rings? Hopefully he does not sink that low. Great story, happily waiting for the next insert

Author's Response: Yes, those rings may pose a problem! Thanks for your review. :) LB x

Amr2013.03.12 - 11:51AM12: Without CeremonySigned
I'm enjoying re-reading this story, and this is certainly a difficult chapter for Hermione. (As I remember, things soon become much worse.) One bit of concrit: your betas should have flagged your use of the verb "belie." It's not a synonym for betray, but its opposite. It means "to make a lie of"; so, "Her sad eyes belied her assurances that everything in her marriage was going well." You seem to care about such things, so I mention it. I seem to remember several instances of this mistake the first time you posted the story.

Author's Response: Amr! It's lovely to hear from you, and thanks for the heads-up. Yes, I should have spotted that - there were a few like it in the original - homey/homely, evinced/evidenced, reviled/repulsed ... Things that would make me cringe if I thought my agent would see them, which is precisely the reason for the clean-up. Many thanks for reading, and for your review. LB x

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