Reviews for Denial
| Merthur87 | 2014.05.18 - 11:43PM | 6: The Fool's Triumph | Signed |
| This was so painful. I loved it.
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| Merthur87 | 2014.05.18 - 11:21PM | 5: All the Pleasures Prove | Signed |
| Glad we got some of Snape's life in this chappie. Cordelia's background is well though out; world building and all that :) I like how what Cordelia and Snape's relationship amounts to is fleshed out incrementally. Makes it so we get to feel some mystery about them and that works well with this being hg/ss in the long run.
I cracked up so much at Severus' bit about his intolerance being endearing; quite meta, doncha think?
I think distaste for vulnerability is a very slytherin trait.
I have a theory that there's a ward for people who've hexed xirself while using their wand as a sex toy; I'm glad to see by that book that you might agree. ;)
I wondered if Theo could be Snape's step-son! I wonder what Severus knows that makes them so incompatible; or maybe he's just being a git. lol. |
| Merthur87 | 2014.05.18 - 10:48PM | 4: The Eyes of the Doe | Signed |
| I love the idea of Draco the self-chastising barrister student. Gives me the snickers. Snape thinks Mione cut short his Lilly dream? Yikes.
I'm wondering what's up with Theo. Did he think Draco had a thing for Granger, maybe? |
| Merthur87 | 2014.05.18 - 10:10PM | 3: Another Measure | Signed |
| Cooking instructor named Splattermore? Cute! Hermione's turmoil over (belatedly) saving Severus' life is a fun (in a h/c kind of way) dynamic. You make me want to hug Neville so much. |
| Merthur87 | 2014.05.18 - 09:53PM | 2: Dying Generations | Signed |
| You've done a brilliant take of the marriage law bureaucracy from the representatives, and Liaison, to Belgrave House! I like the idea that Hermione choose to stay after Padma offered to leave with her; it seems very in character for some optimism of Padma's to rub off on Hermione and help her make her decision to stay after Padma makes such a loyal offer. Gryffindors, eh? I laughed at them learning Snape's involvement. Great beat! |
| Merthur87 | 2014.05.18 - 08:55PM | 1: Decisions and Revisions | Signed |
| Way to break convention and have Snape married to someone else! And I love the bookending of the summonings! |
| Mme_S | 2014.04.30 - 11:39PM | 1: Decisions and Revisions | Signed |
| I don't remember if I submitted a review or just thought about it, so here goes, at the risk of being repetitive. I generally enjoy Harry Potter fan fictions, but don't remember many. Yours stayed with me. The writing was great, and I particularly enjoyed your Snape and Hermione, the unfolding of the relationship, and the universe in whch it unfolded. I felt the loss of "Little Beloved" after you took it down, much as I was happy for you -- I'm a writer, as well. I found out by chance that "Little Beloved" was back. I hope you get another chance with a publisher for your non-fanfiction. But meanwhile, I'm delighted at the return of your wonderful story. |
| reverseuniverse | 2014.04.29 - 08:18PM | 34: Epilogue - I Think My Love As Rare | Signed |
| Thank you so much for reposting this story. Your talent for writing is evident in every chapter of this fic. I love how you handled Severus and Hermione. I also believe this is one of the few stories with infidelity themes that was handled in such an effective and understandable manner. I wish you the best of luck with your original publications. You deserve to have your tales in print for future generations to enjoy. |
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