Reviews for Umbra
kodiak | 2006.05.12 - 02:00PM | 5: Chapter Four | Signed |
Oooo, Ron is such a prat!
Author's Response: I know! |
nocturnus | 2006.05.12 - 09:24AM | 5: Chapter Four | Signed |
I've just discover this fic. Is lovely. I'm interested into know a little more about ROn, please don't turn him inot an idiot. His position is hard too, and his feelings could be ambivalent towards his new found patternity.
Author's Response: I think that pretty soon we'll see a chapter from Ron's POV.
Hopefully I don't want to turn him into an idiot - it would be too easy and not nearly as interesting as him becoming emotionally involved as well.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
sheri22 | 2006.05.12 - 09:15AM | 5: Chapter Four | Signed |
please update soon... This is a good story so far and I am curious as to how it will progress... update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it. Sadly, this is Mother's Day weekend and I, being the pawn of a corporate empire (read: Bath & Body Works) will be working sun-up to sun-down. However, I am going to try my very hardest to have a new chapter up for validation by monday. |
StudiousSlytherin | 2006.05.12 - 08:58AM | 5: Chapter Four | Signed |
Ron is acting so reserved (hopefully it is only shock) and I am hoping that he eventually comes around for Athena's sake. Lavender can splinch herself as far as I am concerned. Her attitude toward an innocent child is inexcusable. It is so nice to see the family reunited and Hermione back with her old friends. I can't wait to see how things progress and of course to see where Severus fits into everything.
Author's Response: I'm glad I've caught your interest! |
bellasol67 | 2006.05.12 - 06:47AM | 5: Chapter Four | Signed |
Ron's a weenie and needs to be hexed good! I liked this chapter, seeing how Ron reacted made me a little sad for Athena-maybe the twins will teach her some tricks she can play on him. Nice update.
Author's Response: Indeed. More soon! |
gummy | 2006.05.12 - 04:27AM | 5: Chapter Four | Signed |
Hmmm.very good! You really write very well:)And I must say that I`m suprised (positive !!!)that you so often update story! Ok, time to go for meeting with professor at Uni- today is friday and I will have no classes till monday, so happy weekend!!!:)paula
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! Well, not updating so quickly anymore - for which, many apologies! |
Subversa | 2006.05.12 - 03:22AM | 5: Chapter Four | Signed |
Poor little girl! She wants so much for her father to love her, and he is so aloof! And to (this *is* Ashwinder) end up with Snape, instead?
This is going to be *very* interesting.
Author's Response: You left me with such a perfect opening, that I have to say this:
Just because Hermione ends up with Snape doesn't mean Athena is going to - or Hermione for that matter. All "Ashwinder" means is that they become involved. So... don't get too attached to the idea of Snape as a daddy - or too unattached, for that matter. We'll just have to wait and see.
Glad you've been reading! |
Heksie | 2006.05.12 - 03:18AM | 5: Chapter Four | Signed |
Great story! I hope I'll be reading more of it soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! |
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