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Amr2006.06.06 - 01:48AM6: Chapter FiveSigned
He told Samantha her father's family had been looking for her all her life!?!? What a stupid, insensitive bastard! Worse even than canon Snape has ever been. Your Snape has a hell of a lot of growing up to do. Something tells me that Samantha thinks so, too. She trusted him when no one else did, and yet he abandoned his nascent respect for Hermione merely because she succumbed to the temptation to take or give comfort on the night before a battle when they all could have died. He punished her for it at the time, and now he's punishing her again by setting her innocent daughter up for a life-wrenching disappointment. I hope you've got some seriously painful comeuppance in store for him. This is, I assume from the site, an SSHG story; I hope he makes some major changes before she agrees to do so much as look at him. Very involving story (obviously).

Author's Response: Yes, yes yes! I know! I'm so glad you've been reading and getting involved =) More soon, and yes, Snape does need to do some very, very serious growing up.

Osiodhachain2006.06.06 - 12:33AM6: Chapter FiveSigned
There are so many things about this story that I love so far. I like that things aren't all neat and tidy. Ron didn't wrap Athena up in a bear hug; Hermione didn't confess undying love for Snape; Snape clearly has residual anger and resentment built up over finding the two of them in flagrante delicato all those years ago. I'm looking forward to learning a little more of the back story...for instance, Hermione's motivations in shagging Ron. Was it just a I-don't-want-to-die-a-virgin kind of thing? Or something more?

Author's Response: Oh! Next chapter! That question - of Hermione's motivation - is answered next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

hedgehog2006.06.06 - 12:25AM6: Chapter FiveSigned
Good to see you back!

Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long! I promise I'll be updating on a more regular schedule now.

mekareami2006.06.06 - 12:19AM6: Chapter FiveSigned
Thanks for the update :) Still looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks! More is on the way!

Scarlet Siren2006.06.05 - 11:36PM6: Chapter FiveSigned
Hmm... Hey, jealousy. I wonder how he's going to react when he realizes the reason she's able to "disappoint" him with her choice of companions. Very interesting! I'm happy to see this update.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm sorry it took so terribly long for me to update, but I've also got Ch.6 waiting for approval!

SusanDara2006.05.26 - 04:10PM5: Chapter FourSigned
I just found this story and wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed each chapter. Your idea is so powerfull and moving... I can't wait to see where you take this in future. Best of luck and looking forward to reading more. Susan

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm glad I've caught your interest and I hope you continue to enjoy it!

IceAngl1052006.05.17 - 01:49AM5: Chapter FourSigned
great story, please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Will do!

Ruperts_Girl2006.05.16 - 06:11PM5: Chapter FourSigned
Very well done, brilliant story, please continue

Author's Response: Thank you! More soon, I promise.

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