Reviews for Umbra
| Echo Undone | 2006.07.05 - 11:05PM | 8: Chapter Seven | Signed |
| Well done. Interesting psychological interacting. You are perhaps a child of divorce? |
| NinnySnape | 2006.07.05 - 07:15AM | 8: Chapter Seven | Signed |
| LOL what a smart little girly... and what is Severus playing at... love your story!
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| Osiodhachain | 2006.07.04 - 03:18PM | 8: Chapter Seven | Signed |
| Snape does hold a personal grudge against her mother, so how will that affect Athena's plans, I wonder? |
| crystal singer | 2006.07.04 - 11:45AM | 8: Chapter Seven | Signed |
| Interesting, I can see this story developing into a very good one. Thanks for writting and make it long! |
| Magicmizzy | 2006.07.04 - 08:49AM | 3: Chapter Two | Signed |
| Aside from the achievment improbablities, you have a time line problem. Hermione turned twelved shortly after the beginning of first year and is a year older than most of the other students (her birthday is just after the beginning of the school year and you must be eleven to start at hogwarts). She was then 19 not 18 at the end of seventh year so it has only been 10 years since their final battle. |
| pickles | 2006.07.04 - 08:25AM | 8: Chapter Seven | Signed |
| thank you for a new chapter. i have a feeling she will be a slytherin... |
| bpiza | 2006.07.04 - 06:32AM | 8: Chapter Seven | Signed |
| Oh, dang it! I've reached the end again. Hopefully it will only be temporary though, and I can read more soon??? I'm really loving this story so far. I wonder if when SS received Athena's letter he had flashbacks to the elder Miss Granger at the same age. (I know it is Hermione's daughter and all, but she is the most articulate eleven year old I've ever heard of too...) Good work so far. Please keep writing! |
| Kaylin | 2006.07.03 - 08:59PM | 8: Chapter Seven | Signed |
| Thank you so much for updating. I love your story so much! I haven't read this chapter yet, but I am certain it will be wonderful!
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