Reviews for Umbra
oriannajones | 2006.05.11 - 06:46AM | 4: Chapter Three | Signed |
I found the first couple of entries confusing, but now I'm loving this. |
bellasol67 | 2006.05.11 - 06:27AM | 4: Chapter Three | Signed |
I like this so far. Why do I have this feeling that Ron is going to be a weenie to his kid? Looking forward to your next update and loving the fact that it's going to be at the Burrow! |
pickles | 2006.05.11 - 06:15AM | 4: Chapter Three | Signed |
wonderful chapter.
exciting for a young girl. I can see the grandparents greating her with open arms. Hopefully Ron will get a shot in the butt before he sees his daughter. It's not her fault things didn't go as he "requested" them to be.
So he's hooked back up with Lavender or was he still with her when he had a round at Hermione?
I'm hoping you'll have another chapter tonight. Going to need it after 4 - first grade classes and a play.
Author's Response: I'll try my very hardest. I'm glad you are enjoying this! |
Subversa | 2006.05.11 - 04:51AM | 3: Chapter Two | Signed |
Oh, Hermione with Ron's baby and Severus with an American lover ... we had a road to travel to get this story to "Ashwinder" status! You have me intrigued; I eagerly await your next update.
Author's Response: Indeed we do - but I assure you, we will get there. |
mekareami | 2006.05.11 - 12:53AM | 3: Chapter Two | Signed |
Thank you for filling in some of the back story :) I am really enjoying it and eager for more |
Xuanglin | 2006.05.11 - 12:48AM | 2: Chapter One | Signed |
Excellent beginning. I can hardly wait to see how it progresses.
~Lin |
Xuanglin | 2006.05.11 - 12:03AM | 2: Chapter One | Signed |
Excellent beginning. I can hardly wait to see how it progresses.
~Lin |
pookie | 2006.05.10 - 11:17PM | 3: Chapter Two | Signed |
I'm confused -- in the prologue, Snape says to Athena "Your family, Athena, has been looking for you ever since." However, we now know that the Weasley's did not know about Athena. Is this a glitch? Should the statement in the prologue be "Your family, Athena, has been looking for HER ever since"?
Author's Response: well, actually.... it IS supposed to be "you." Seriously, Snape is not being presented as an overly nice person in my story, and he is fully capable of lying; this comment will be explained in later chapters - when Snape and Hermione meet again. |
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