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| Nicci | 2006.05.10 - 02:45AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Oooh! Wonderfull! Please write more :) | |||
| MaraRiddle | 2006.05.10 - 01:13AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Wow. Interesting character development. So, Athena has the tiniest bit of hatred toward her mother? Well, I would suppose I would to if I were deliberately kept from my father for my entire life. My family. But...geez, Snape is kind of taking a few liberties here, isn't he? I mean he called her a daft cow. Fool, ignorant witch and a few other choice adjectival phrases come to mind, but not really daft cow. That's very personal. Any particular reason why? Author's Response: There are a few reasons, actually, to be revealed in Ch. 3. Hope you keep reading! Author's Response: Actually, I lied. Revealed in Ch. 2... which is, I guess, sort of the Ch.3 if you include the prologue.... whatever. Anyway, thanks for the review. | |||
| greenwood | 2006.05.09 - 11:59PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Wow! What an intro chapter! You leave us with a hundred mysteries about Harmonies life and why she left England. I can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thanks! (Sorry it took me so long to respond!) | |||
| Scarlet Siren | 2006.05.09 - 11:20PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Very interesting start -- I'm really anxious to see where you're going with this. Author's Response: Thanks! Me too! | |||
| pickles | 2006.05.09 - 11:20PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Saw this on the Random select list. Sounded intriguing. Makes we wonder what is Snape up to? Is Ron really the father? waiting for more. p | |||
| Nightblue | 2006.05.09 - 11:03PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Hrm... interesting. :D I'd like to see more. | |||
| brontegirl04 | 2006.05.09 - 09:58PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| This has a really neat beginning. I like that it really is mostly from Athena's perspective. I like that the reader doesn't really know what happened that drove Hermione from a still-living Ron and the wizarding world. I'll look forward to reading an update. | |||
| lovethelab | 2006.05.09 - 09:46PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Wow! What a great first chapter! I can not wait to hear what Hermione says to Snape!!! Because I know that you will not let us down even if Athena did not hear it! And I really want to know why Hermione left England and how did she keep the Weasleys from finding her. And why does Snape have to be so smug about Athena wanting to go to England and Hogwarts?? What does he get from this, besides hurting Hermione? But back to the spelling bee - - looks like the apple did not fall far from that tree! Author's Response: Thanks so much. Unfortunately, you'll have to wait a while to hear what Hermione said to Snape... several chapters, in fact. | |||
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