Reviews for Umbra
pickles | 2006.06.07 - 08:15AM | 6: Chapter Five | Signed |
great chapters. sorry i've been lacking.. waiting for more. i assume with ron patting athena on the head that was the only affection he could show her or even wanted to show her. i hope the rest of the clan make up for ron's obvious mistake. sounds like lavender will be causing some problems too. |
Antagonist Len | 2006.06.07 - 06:14AM | 6: Chapter Five | Signed |
They're all fools... |
siriusluv | 2006.06.07 - 02:25AM | 6: Chapter Five | Signed |
Great story! The behavior of the characters seems very true to canon. Of course Lavender would have to be a "real witch", lol. Looking forward to an update.
Author's Response: Regarding Lav... indeed.
Glad you're enjoying it! |
KeeperoftheSnoopyDance | 2006.06.07 - 12:00AM | 6: Chapter Five | Signed |
Interesting story. The plot lines are so palpable. This is truly well done writing. Keep it up.
And as always, please update!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Ch. 6 is waiting for approval, so you'll have an update soon! |
Deeble | 2006.06.06 - 07:47PM | 6: Chapter Five | Signed |
Whatever Hermione should have done regarding her daughter and her daughter's father, Snape needed that telling off. I'm glad she jostled his self-satisfaction.
Author's Response: Indeed. If felt good to have her telling him off, too! |
thewildestwoe | 2006.06.06 - 06:23PM | 6: Chapter Five | Signed |
Ohhh, too small of a chapter! Well, that's a mainstay complaint for a good story anyway, but I liked your characterization of Snape, and I definitely liked Hermione yelling at him, her magic crackling off of her in waves. Perfect! Thank you!
Looking forward to the next chapter,
The Wildest Woe
Author's Response: It really was a small chapter, but the next is much longer.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! |
evel004 | 2006.06.06 - 02:21PM | 6: Chapter Five | Signed |
Alright, you've got me hooked. I enjoy your characterization, your Snape, and especially the hinted conflict between RontheBastard and RontheDad... or is there a RontheDad? Ooooh, stuff to look forward to. :-) Please post again soon!
Author's Response: Ahaha! Yes, there IS a conflict between RontheBastard and RontheDad. Or, at least, there will be! |
scribbler714 | 2006.06.06 - 09:45AM | 6: Chapter Five | Signed |
Well, I've been following this story but not reviewing, shame on me. Really enjoyed this chapter and how it begins to explain Snape a bit better. I am still dying of curiosity as to why Hermione and Ron ended up in bed together and just how much of a Bad Idea it turned out to be, but I see your note about the next chapter, so I'll be good and stop whining :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you've been reading and thanks so much for the review! |
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