Reviews for Umbra
| Maggie | 2006.07.03 - 12:38PM | 8: Chapter Seven | Signed |
| Every child wants her/his parents together. I think she has a real shock coming to her. |
| flatorres | 2006.07.03 - 09:07AM | 8: Chapter Seven | Signed |
| This little girl is going to manipulate Professor Snape? I can't wait to read more on that.....hint hint. Good story and it's getting better... |
| June W | 2006.07.03 - 08:04AM | 8: Chapter Seven | Signed |
| Oh, this poor kid is in desperate need of a reality check with Ron. If Hermione won't do it, Severus may be forced to tell her that her parents are not likely to marry (since Severus was the one who wrongly told her that her family has been looking for her for eleven years). Otherwise, Athena's efforts to split Ron and Lav may push Ron to tell his parents to choose between Ron and Athena, or make Ron do something else that ends up hurting Athena. Then again, the clever author probably has very sneaky tricks up her sleeve - if only you would write faster so we can read them! Thanks for posting!! |
| cmscks04 | 2006.06.26 - 03:08AM | 7: Chapter Six | Signed |
| oh do hurry and make another chapter PLEASE!!!! |
| Kaylin | 2006.06.20 - 11:00AM | 1: Prologue | Anonymous |
| I really love this story so far. Please update soon. I would hate for a wonderful story like this one to be abandoned. :) |
| Leona | 2006.06.12 - 07:12PM | 7: Chapter Six | Signed |
| Wow! and again, because it bears repeating, Wow! I hadn't see this story before, so I was able to read it all at one time. When I got to the end of Chapter 6 and realized there were no more chapters, I almost cried. Beautiful story so far ... you can never beat up on Ron too much. (He's actually a great character, you can smarten him up or dumb him down and still fit him into any story.)
Nasty, small minded, hurt, bitter Snape is good too. Always makes me think of make-up sex, just waiting to happen.
You make me really believe in your characters and I really, really feel for Athena.
Kudos...please update soon! |
| Lady Entity | 2006.06.10 - 05:22PM | 7: Chapter Six | Signed |
| This is such a great story! I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
| SylvanTales | 2006.06.10 - 04:21AM | 7: Chapter Six | Signed |
| It's frustrating that Ashwinder doesn't say when things are posted, because I don't know if this is a new story (that might have new chapters coming, oh I hope I hope!) or if it's been ushered into the closet.
I do hope that you'll be writing more; I'm really, REALLY loving the story so far!! |
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