Reviews for Umbra
| septentrion | 2006.06.08 - 04:27AM | 7: Chapter Six | Signed |
| the way I see things, Ron didn't deserve to be a father. He used Hermione and, albeit unknowingly, had her lose a potential love. If it wasn't for Athena, he would have "destroyed" (can't find a better word right now) her life. |
| septentrion | 2006.06.08 - 04:26AM | 7: Chapter Six | Signed |
| the way I see things, Ron didn't deserve to be a father. He used Hermione and, albeit unknowingly, had her lose a potential love. If it wasn't for Athena, he would have "destroyed" (can't find a better word right now) her life. |
| Osiodhachain | 2006.06.08 - 12:42AM | 7: Chapter Six | Signed |
| Interesting. Now if only Hermione can convey to Snape that it was just a desperate night-before-the-big-battle shag, perhaps he'll get over himself and declare that he secretly loves her. :) |
| lemonade8 | 2006.06.08 - 12:30AM | 7: Chapter Six | Signed |
| Wow... seriously disliking Ron at the moment. What a dick. Between his childish behavior and Severus', Hermione has been put in a bad place. Can't wait for more. |
| KiraAriannya | 2006.06.08 - 12:13AM | 7: Chapter Six | Signed |
| Great story so far... |
| June W | 2006.06.07 - 11:34PM | 7: Chapter Six | Signed |
| Lavender had been steadily rebuffing Ron’s attempts at seduction for weeks now. DEFINITELY a mistake for Hermione! Ron was so manipulative and selfish, saying anything to get Hermione to agree to sex when she just wanted to focus on the Final Battle the next day. And Lavender still wants Ron... Thanks for the new chapter! |
| Scarlet Siren | 2006.06.07 - 11:21PM | 7: Chapter Six | Signed |
| I want to believe that Ron was just a mixed-up kid who was scared about the prospect of dying. But I can't help but hate him a little. It takes damn good writing to make someone so conflicted about a character. Bravo! Another fantastic chapter! |
| Maggie | 2006.06.07 - 09:46AM | 6: Chapter Five | Signed |
| Very enlightening. Thanks! |
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