Reviews for Umbra
| Godin | 2006.05.10 - 03:21PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| I understand that you want to get them to Scotland, but i am not "convinced" by Athena's caracter. Yes, i believe she would want to know her family. NO i do not believe that any girl so strongly attached to one person (Herm as a loveable mom) would risk an angry parent by shouting like that. Shock, running to her room and return to beg for a trip to Scotland, maybe... But not this, nor do i like Snapes wording. I'll be awaiting next chapters to see why you did this like this. The prologue certainly has me wanting to know what comes next.(this is my first non-gushing review, be proud ;-) |
| prisnape | 2006.05.10 - 03:09PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| I want more. I love this kind of stories. |
| hedgehog | 2006.05.10 - 02:30PM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Interesting start...I like this new angle! |
| kodiak | 2006.05.10 - 09:53AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Wow! great start. I can't wait to find out what happened between Ron and Hermione that led her to flee the country. |
| Maggie | 2006.05.10 - 09:39AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Well why did Hermoine leave?
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| Chartreuse | 2006.05.10 - 08:51AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| V interesting start. Looking forward for more. BTW: you used the perfect lines for the summary. Intruiging. |
| Majenta | 2006.05.10 - 06:08AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| Oh my - what a good start to the story. Looking forward to more soon!! |
| Brisinggammen | 2006.05.10 - 04:28AM | 1: Prologue | Signed |
| What an extremely interesting start. I'm filled with questions and very curious to read more. The obvious thing of course is to resent Hermione for keeping her daughter from her father and keeping her own life a secret. However people rarely do something like that without reasons and I'm sure Hermione has, if not good reasons, then still reasons to do so. And what part will Snape play? He did not break the news gently, but then that was never his style. Did he play some part in backstory and were he trying to get a bit of payback in, or was it just his ol' plain unpleasentness shining through? As this is aechived here at Ash I assume we will see some Hermione/Snape action later on - but where does Ron fit in? Oh, you got me curious now... |
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