Reviews for An Army of Snapes
| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.05.20 - 06:45PM | 4: Chapter 4 | Signed |
| how did the kind- snape cheak on the others so quickly?? |
| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.05.20 - 06:38PM | 4: Chapter 4 | Signed |
| Shite. Scrambling out of the bed, Severus slapped at the hands that reached up to pull him down into their depraved midst. Not that it wasn’t mortifyingly erotic to see ten versions of himself pleasing each other, and not that it didn’t give him some definite trouble when it came to fastening his trousers, after checking all of his quarters and not locating the eleventh, missing body. Oh, please let him be Prude-Snape! Please let him be the missing one!
Not even bothering to throw on a shirt under his frock-coat, nor socks on his feet before shoving them into his boots, Severus left his quarters in a rush, checking his office and the classroom. No one there. Silently swearing, he hurried out of the dungeon level, striding as quickly as he could hurry up the stairs to the Fat Lady’s portrait. A murmur of the cypher that allowed instant access to a teacher, and the sleepy woman didn’t even bother to crack open her eyes to look at him, just waved one plump hand as the other one cradled her cheek, releasing the frame so he could enter.
Given the hour was twenty past one, there was no one in the common room, thankfully. Murmuring the same password as before, the one that temporarily locked the girls’ tower steps--he did not want the ignominy of sliding back down, nor the cacaphony of the alarm waking everyone--Severus mounted the stairs. At the turning that led to the Head Girl’s room, he crossed the short distance to the door, then hesitated. If he was wrong, if she was alone…she slept in the nude. Did he want to startle her awake, where she might sit up, and…and the covers would fall down, tormenting him further with visions of things he was not allowed to touch?
In the silence of his indecision, Severus heard voices. Hers…and a much deeper one. Leaning close to the door, he whispered a charm to hear better. “Magnaurum.”
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| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.05.20 - 06:37PM | 4: Chapter 4 | Signed |
| I thought you said that the original one left with out his shirt on? |
| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.05.20 - 06:13PM | 4: Chapter 4 | Signed |
| The kind of sounds one often heard at a Malfoy orgy. Snapping his eyes open, Severus stared at the canopy of his bed, then rolled over onto his side and peered at the pallet-strewn floor. Sure enough, some of his dopplegangers were stroking themselves…but no less than three pairs were stroking and suckling each other…and one pair was…was…
“--Bloody hell! I am not interested in that sort of thing, anymore!”
“Liar,” the Snape on top of the other Snape grunted with the apex of each slow, deep stroke. |
| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.05.20 - 06:12PM | 4: Chapter 4 | Signed |
| so is the original snape gay? |
| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.05.20 - 05:52PM | 3: Chapter 3 | Signed |
| That shook off whatever spell the real Snape was under. He snapped his expression into a scowl at his duplicate. “--You will do no such thing! You’re coming back to the dungeons with me, this instant!”
“We cannot travel together,” copy-Snape drawled, sending a smirk Hermione’s way. “If anyone sees us in the halls at the same time, our little replication secret will be blown. One of us will have to stay behind for at least ten minutes, so that the chances of someone seeing two Snapes too closely together will be negated. I’ll stay behind, since I--”
“You’ll do no such thing! You’ll return to the dungeons at once!” the real Snape ordered him sharply. “I’ll stay behind for a few blasted minutes!”
“Excuse me! Since it’s my bedroom, shouldn’t I have a say in who stays and who goes?” Hermione interjected. She didn’t want the snarly Snape to stay behind; she wanted the charming Snape. Well, ‘charming’ might’ve been a bit of a stretch, but ‘communicative’ and ‘polite’ did fit on the ticket--
“--No!” both men snapped at her. They glanced at each other, and the duplicate wrinkled his nose in disgusted defeat.
“Fine. You’ll stay here for ten minutes, no less and no more. If you’re not back down in our quarters at the end of that time, I’m coming back up here to hex you.” Slipping out the door, he closed it quickly…and a sparkle that wasn’t entirely due to the metal of the knob glittered over its surface as Hermione watched the panel shut.
Severus grabbed for the doorknob. “I’ll stay here for only two bloody minu…what the?” He twisted the knob, or rather, attempted to twist it. He jiggled it, yanked on it, and shook it. “He locked it! Ouvrum! …Alohomora!”
Nothing happened. He tried another spell, and then another. Still locked.
“--Bloody bastard!” he hissed, staring at the immovable door, trying to out-guess his duplicate as to which spell the other wizard had used.
“Great. Just great! Stuck in my bedroom with you,” Hermione drawled, hands settling more firmly on her hips. The Potions Master rounded on her, drawing in a breath to lambast her…and stilled, staring at her.
Stared at her chest, rather. The same place, Hermione suddenly realized, where his gaze had been riveted in utter distraction just a few moments ago, before the departure of the other-Snape. Which the other-Snape had stared at, too. Those dark eyes were now riveted to the inner curves of the breasts that were even now flushing with embarrassment, because she was simply the kind to blush that low on her body when overwrought.
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| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.05.20 - 05:52PM | 3: Chapter 3 | Signed |
| it doesnt at all make any sense any of it?
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| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.05.20 - 05:51PM | 3: Chapter 3 | Signed |
| if its the copy that is the one to stay behing why did the original one lock the door?? |
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