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Reviews for An Army of Snapes

Lilly2005.06.04 - 12:03PM8: EpilogueSigned
*lol* that was very well done. *g* I liked a lot. a small glimpse of the moment they reveal themselves to the others would certainly be hilarious. :) just food for thought. *weg*

Author's Response: Thanks. It would be interesting (would Ron scream and drop his wand a third time?), but I'm embroiled in writing a sequel (or at least new chapters) for a different one...plus tending to all of my other foot-snogging plot-bunny hutch-escapees... ~Lotm

DjMarlene2005.06.01 - 05:06PM8: EpilogueSigned
Beautiful! :D

Author's Response: Danke! ~Lotm

Satoni2005.05.30 - 07:54AM8: EpilogueSigned
so good....really. it was fun to read and romantic... Cheers

Author's Response: (curtsies) Thanks! ~Lotm

Amr2005.05.27 - 11:23PM8: EpilogueSigned
What a lovely little story! This one came very close to PWP in the middle, but I loved it--all except for List-Snape, who was pretty tedious. And the duplication potion was brilliant!

Author's Response: Heheh, then you got the point: List-Snape IS tedious! As another reviewer put it, the contrast is "making love with Severus versus having sex with Snape", and the division between the two forms of sex is plain to see... ~Lotm

Lady Apythia2005.05.26 - 12:33AM8: EpilogueSigned
What a great story! I actually stayed up well past my bedtime to read it. It was very enjoyable. I thought you did an excellent job with the different sides of Snape. I also really like the idea of the potion/duplication as a way to defeat LV. Overall an excellent story that I would be happy to recommend to all!

Author's Response: Tut Tut, Lady Apythia; staying up past your curfew? Ten points from your House, and a detention. With Professor Binns. The punishment will be to stay awake as he drones on in great detail about the Pig War. (Note to all and sundry, this is an actual conflict in American/Canadian history. It just happened to take place on the San Juan Islands between a very small group of people, and yes, it involved porcine products.) Now, go to bed!

Heh heh.

I thought, if we can duplicate an army of Snapes, why not of Potters and Grangers and Weasleys, oh my! ...And then I realized there's already an army of Weasleys, and I didn't want to a) be redundant in the wake of Molly and Arthur's snogfest results, and b) innundate the world with redheads, freaking out most of the wizarding world population and giving Severus Snape (original and copies alike) a coronary and/or stroke...which is why Ron doesn't get duplicated in this fic.

Oh, and before I forget--thank you for recommending it! I hope those you direct to it enjoy it as much as you did! ;-D ~Lotm

Lady Apythia2005.05.25 - 09:33PM2: Chapter 2Signed
Love the nicknames! (I am also prone to name men likewise; glad to see I am not alone) And the "Are you gay?" This is making me laugh out loud!

Author's Response: Excellent! My devious plot is...erm, my story is clearly entertaining you, exactly as I planned! ...mweheheh... ;-D ~Lotm

Lady Apythia2005.05.25 - 09:10PM1: Chapter 1Signed
Ha! What a clever premise for a story! The following of the frog's movements was well done. I am anxious to read the rest.

Author's Response: Thank you. I still crack myself up over that line, "...do frogs dream of marshmallow sheep?" Oh, darnit it; now I've got a craving for s'morgasms... (s'mores made with the addition of creamy peanutbutter, mmm!) It's been suggested that the frog moved around too much for too long, based on Ron's comment in Philosopher's Stone that they only had one good jump in them, but I contend this was a very fresh chocolate frog, and not the usual sort that sits around in a warehouse for a month or so before being shipped out, then sits in a back storeroom for a couple weeks on top of that, before sitting on the shelves for several more days... (this explains the crappy quality of Easter chocolate; I believe it is manufactured back in February with the Valentine's chocolates, only it sits around, develops fat bloom, the sugar crystalizes, and in general just tastes horrid. blecch!) Anyway, the frog was very important to the story, as you can tell. It's also an indirect reference to a quip Severus makes in "For Someone Special" in, um...(kills back lifting printout copy of FSS)...at the end of chapter 92. The quote is (and it cracks me up):

“I might wind up young enough to try smuggling chocolate frogs into one of my classes, and that would be worse than a visit from Mr. Longbottom, if one of them leapt into a cauldron at an inopportune moment.”

So you can see I just *had* to put that into another story somewhere... ~Lotm

tisasil2005.05.19 - 10:30AM4: Chapter 4Signed
The paragraph that starts: "The urge to touch him....." is lyrical. You have written many sexual scenes, yet each is fresh and vibrant. You don't waste words and make me read some passages over and over because of your way of writing. You're gifted. No doubt about it!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'll have to go looking for that one; I can't remember exactly where it falls... Ah, well, I'll find it. I try to write stories I'd want to read again and again, and I only post those where I feel I've managed that lofty a goal. Hugs & Insanities, ~Lotm

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