Reviews for An Army of Snapes
| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.05.20 - 08:47PM | 6: Chapter 6 | Signed |
| just to make it staright is the original snape just called severus and the copies called snape?? |
| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.05.20 - 08:46PM | 5: Chapter 5 | Signed |
| so the one hermione thought was the original one ISNT reallt the original one??
(Hermione eyed him askance, catching him before he could lower his hand again as the others reflexively glanced his way. “--Wait a minute, you’re the original. Your existence isn’t predicated on making love to me!”
“…Don’t be so sure of that, Hermione.” It wasn’t the original Severus Snape that spoke, however.
She looked the other way, at the clothed copy lounging against the bedpost. He had made that counterclaim, not the original Severus Snape. “Whatever do you mean?”
“My dear, I’m afraid you will have to figure that one out all on your own,” Kind-Snape mock-apologized, not looking the least bit repentant.)
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| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.05.20 - 08:38PM | 5: Chapter 5 | Signed |
| (Hermione was getting dizzy, following the conversation from Snape to Snape to Snape. Four had been eliminated, and one wasn’t in the room; that was most likely Prude-Snape. There was Kind-Snape, Original Severus, and four Sex-Snapes on the bed with her and the original.)
you already said original snape why did you repeat him as the ones that hermione were thinking about
(Original Severus, and four Sex-Snapes on the bed with her and the original.)
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| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.05.20 - 08:32PM | 5: Chapter 5 | Signed |
| the one that was holding her now is the original snape?! |
| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.05.20 - 08:23PM | 5: Chapter 5 | Signed |
| why isnt the real snape or any of the snapes fucking or something her from behind or something?? mmmmm i'm horny after reading this story this chapter!! mmmmmm FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mmmmmmmmmmm |
| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.05.20 - 08:14PM | 5: Chapter 5 | Signed |
| please make clearner which snape is which because am getting confused now or is that what your trying to do confuse your readers??? |
| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.05.20 - 08:12PM | 5: Chapter 5 | Signed |
| so she was the snape that entered the room before when hermione thought (Apparently they would have a second round together, before sending in his army of clones. Not that she’d object, now that she knew what all the fuss of lovemaking was about; Hermione just wondered how bloody exhausted she would be, by the end of the experience.)
was it the original real snape?? if not which one out of all of them is it??
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| ALANRICKMANFAN21 | 2010.05.20 - 08:08PM | 5: Chapter 5 | Signed |
| He pushed her over and kissed his way from her inner knee to her intimate secrets, making her sigh and arch up into him. Apparently they would have a second round together, before sending in his army of clones. Not that she’d object, now that she knew what all the fuss of lovemaking was about; Hermione just wondered how bloody exhausted she would be, by the end of the experience.
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Severus opened the bathroom door and spotted himself making love to Hermione. It was a doubly disconcerting sight. He just wasn’t accustomed to seeing himself making love to anyone--in mirrors, let alone via this unique method--but more than that, he hadn’t expected any of the other Snapes to enter his bedchamber until they were summoned. Apparently one of the hormonal buggers simply couldn’t wait. Tempted to slam the door, Severus found himself shutting it quietly instead, softly enough that the young woman whimpering with desire on his bed wouldn’t notice his entrance. Now was not the time to startle her with the realization that she was naked in a bedchamber with two equally naked Severus Snapes.
Still, he couldn’t help but be captivated by the sight of Hermione Granger whimpering and biting her lower lip, squirming on his broad bed while one of his clones devoured her delicious essence. There was no hesitation, no lingering maidenly shyness in the lithe young woman, not in the way she splayed her thighs, nor in the way she tugged on fistfuls of his duplicate’s dark hair, yanking him closer as she thrust her pelvis up into that long-nosed face. Circling around the foot of the bed, Severus stared down at her, observing how her eyes had fluttered shut at some point, not even seeing his approach. Leaving him free to enjoy the sight of her body wriggling in the impatient effort to reach her climax.
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