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Reviews for As Morning Falls

katty88122011.01.17 - 04:26AM1: Chapter 1: As Morning FallsSigned
Achingly beautiful!

Author's Response: Thank you. I confess, this is my secretly favourite child. I think I said that about Black-Eyed Angel, so don't tell it, but Morning is my favourite!

WnL6242011.01.16 - 02:24AM5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your LoveSigned
Well done and the ending is both bittersweet and yet happily so! Thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you - I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Of all the fics I've written, I have to say this is my secretly favourite child.

ladyjulian2011.01.15 - 01:05AM5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your LoveSigned
I'm so glad to have found your work. Your characters feel true to me and your dialogue is excellent. And if you don't mind my saying so, reading your fic has consoled me. Long story, but never mind why - just thank you.

Author's Response: Dear Lady, there is no greater compliment that something you have created has given someone else comfort or joy or happiness. I hope whatever you need, you will be able to find it, and I'm honoured that I helped in some way. I'm sending you hugs and comfort. Be well.

SadAngel2011.01.02 - 07:36PM5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your LoveSigned
Teddy, you nearly gave me a heart attack when Phineas told them that they are dead. But, thanfully, they're not! I'm a sucker for happy endings. Great story! Just something I needed today =) Keep on writing! - BlueRavenAngel

Author's Response: Blue, fancy meeting you here! All my stuff that's here is also on dA. I've just uploaded the Prologue to the new one, and I've got no clue where this one is going to go, so hop on board, it's going to be an adventure!

madeleone2011.01.01 - 01:53PM5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your LoveSigned
Now for my real review for chapter 5. Wonderful ending, in a way I wish that they had reclaimed their old lives and that their children knew the story of what heroes their parents really were. But then again, they've managed to make an entirely new life for themselves in Australia. I assuming (hoping) that they reconnected with Hermione's parents, restored their memories and they were an active part of the boys lives growing up. I do feel bad though that Harry carried the burden of guilt all those years, thinking that he had failed Hermione in the end, and that she had suffered a horrible death at the hands of Death Eaters. But all in all another wonderful story. Again I thank you for sharing. :)

Author's Response: I sort of thought without saying that Hermione would reconnect with her parents. I just thought, "If they wanted to escape, where would be the best place?" Then I received a note from my sis-in-law in Australia and thought, 'AHA!" Everyone has given me a bit of grief about making Harry feel so bad for so many years, but as Snape would attest, the best lies are the ones you believe yourself to be true. They had to make it real, or risk being hunted down. And who knows? Perhaps the 'boys' do know the truth. It's a little hard to be at Hogwarts and know otherwise! Thank you for your great review and encouraging feedback.

madeleone2011.01.01 - 01:34PM5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your LoveSigned
Whoops last review was for chapter four, I got ahead of myself. LOL!

Author's Response: Yes, it can get a little confusing!

madeleone2011.01.01 - 01:33PM5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your LoveSigned
Aha, so my suspicions about the incantation were right. :) And now I am wondering who have they become? Darren and Martha? or someone else? Another great story, thanks so much for sharing. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to provide feedback - as someone once said, 'reviews feed the Muse!"

madeleone2011.01.01 - 01:19PM3: Chapter 3: A Soul For Sale Or RentSigned
Holy moley that was hawt! You do write such hot and sexy love scenes, my dear. What was the incantation during sex all about, I wonder? And I loved the banter between them at the end, I hope he takes her advice to heart about being prepared for the snake. Great advice, "don't get dead."

Author's Response: I have to admit, this and Chapter 5 are my favourites. Chapter 5 was actually the first chapter I wrote of this story, and I went backwards from there. I'm glad you liked the advice and the lemons. I'm an erotic fiction writer first and foremost, so writing lemons well is something I aspire to do.

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