Reviews for As Morning Falls
Veritas51 | 2010.12.04 - 01:26PM | 5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your Love | Signed |
Such a beautiful story -- you had me in tears at the end. You did a great job of using words efficiently to evoke great emotions. So much pathos in such a short story! I will read anything else that you write!
Author's Response: I cannot tell you how much I appreciate your kind words. I hope I can continue to write fanfic - I'll see if my Muse has more in store for me! |
Allyll | 2010.12.04 - 01:06PM | 5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your Love | Signed |
Beautiful ending. I really enjoyed this story! Congratulations!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! |
JIMBOPAT | 2010.12.04 - 01:05PM | 5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your Love | Signed |
YOU HAVE NAILED ANOTHER WONDERFUL STORY. VERY ENJOYABLE, LOVE YOUR EPILOG. KEEP UP THE FINE WORK. LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE. JIM
Author's Response: Thank you so much, JIMBOPAT. I never liked the Epilogue, so that's the first thing I wrote, then wrote the other chapters around it! I hope the Muse will favour me with more stories. |
paddiew | 2010.12.04 - 12:15PM | 5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your Love | Signed |
Wonderful epilog. Just the life they should have. Thank you. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank YOU! I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
verasuspense | 2010.12.04 - 10:06AM | 5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your Love | Signed |
Hermione being the mother of not one but two Quidich stars is pretty ironic. At least the youngest boy takes after her ( although he probably loves Quiddich). :-D
Author's Response: Weeell l, I wanted some way to show Severus had sired two strong, viril, handsome powerhouses and Quidditch was the only way I knew how to convey it. I just thought it would be a real two-fingers to the Dark Lord and his posse if Hermione not only survived her torture, but so did her son and he grew up to be a strong, powerful wizard. And you just know that one of their boys would have to be a swot! Thanks for reading and even more, for taking the time to review. |
gifarlme | 2010.12.04 - 08:48AM | 5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your Love | Signed |
that was fantastic! I am wiping away tears to write this! Looking forward to more stories from you!
Author's Response: Then my job is done! LOL Seriously, if a writer can move the reader to tears, it is a very humbling feeling. I really appreciate you taking the time not only to read the story but to write your feelings on it as well. TR |
Tessa85 | 2010.12.04 - 06:17AM | 5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your Love | Signed |
One of the best 19 years later scenes I've read. Wonderful new life for the Snapes. Their kids are great. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. As I've written before, I wrote this chapter before all the others and wrote the story around it. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I quite liked the Snape boys myself! |
harmmac | 2010.12.04 - 05:35AM | 5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your Love | Signed |
Although my Australianism was slightly bruised by the 'strewth' etc in the final chapter (lol), I must confess I was bawling my eyes out approximately one line into Harry's 'appreciation speech'! Brilliantly done. Have added you to my favourite authors list. ~ Kel
Author's Response: Thank you! Lol. My Australian sister-in-law told me that would be the best thing for a hip young Aussie wizard to say, but I didn't ask for spelling! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. This chapter was the actual linchpin for the entire story. I wrote it first, then wrote the rest of the story around it. |
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