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Veritas512010.12.04 - 01:26PM5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your LoveSigned
Such a beautiful story -- you had me in tears at the end. You did a great job of using words efficiently to evoke great emotions. So much pathos in such a short story! I will read anything else that you write!

Author's Response: I cannot tell you how much I appreciate your kind words. I hope I can continue to write fanfic - I'll see if my Muse has more in store for me!

Allyll2010.12.04 - 01:06PM5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your LoveSigned
Beautiful ending. I really enjoyed this story! Congratulations!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

JIMBOPAT2010.12.04 - 01:05PM5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your LoveSigned
YOU HAVE NAILED ANOTHER WONDERFUL STORY. VERY ENJOYABLE, LOVE YOUR EPILOG. KEEP UP THE FINE WORK. LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE. JIM

Author's Response: Thank you so much, JIMBOPAT. I never liked the Epilogue, so that's the first thing I wrote, then wrote the other chapters around it! I hope the Muse will favour me with more stories.

paddiew2010.12.04 - 12:15PM5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your LoveSigned
Wonderful epilog. Just the life they should have. Thank you. Great job.

Author's Response: Thank YOU! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

verasuspense2010.12.04 - 10:06AM5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your LoveSigned
Hermione being the mother of not one but two Quidich stars is pretty ironic. At least the youngest boy takes after her ( although he probably loves Quiddich). :-D

Author's Response: Weeell l, I wanted some way to show Severus had sired two strong, viril, handsome powerhouses and Quidditch was the only way I knew how to convey it. I just thought it would be a real two-fingers to the Dark Lord and his posse if Hermione not only survived her torture, but so did her son and he grew up to be a strong, powerful wizard. And you just know that one of their boys would have to be a swot! Thanks for reading and even more, for taking the time to review.

gifarlme2010.12.04 - 08:48AM5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your LoveSigned
that was fantastic! I am wiping away tears to write this! Looking forward to more stories from you!

Author's Response: Then my job is done! LOL Seriously, if a writer can move the reader to tears, it is a very humbling feeling. I really appreciate you taking the time not only to read the story but to write your feelings on it as well. TR

Tessa852010.12.04 - 06:17AM5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your LoveSigned
One of the best 19 years later scenes I've read. Wonderful new life for the Snapes. Their kids are great. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. As I've written before, I wrote this chapter before all the others and wrote the story around it. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I quite liked the Snape boys myself!

harmmac2010.12.04 - 05:35AM5: Chapter 5: I Clothed Myself In Your Glory And Your LoveSigned
Although my Australianism was slightly bruised by the 'strewth' etc in the final chapter (lol), I must confess I was bawling my eyes out approximately one line into Harry's 'appreciation speech'! Brilliantly done. Have added you to my favourite authors list. ~ Kel

Author's Response: Thank you! Lol. My Australian sister-in-law told me that would be the best thing for a hip young Aussie wizard to say, but I didn't ask for spelling! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. This chapter was the actual linchpin for the entire story. I wrote it first, then wrote the rest of the story around it.

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