Reviews for Ladder
tangledhair | 2007.11.05 - 03:43AM | 4: 4: Rung Two – Him | Signed |
Veruca Vector. I really like that. Good one. And good story. I'm quite enjoying it. peace.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story so far and my wacky name for Vector! |
lkmaide | 2007.10.26 - 01:11AM | 27: 27: Rung Twelve – Him | Signed |
And I'm spent-- that was HOT. Okay so seriously, that was mindblowing-- and when Sev finally hit the mark I swear I felt it too-- OMG You are brilliant
Author's Response: Thanks! It's wonderful to hear that you enjoyed it and found it really hot! |
MollysSister | 2007.08.02 - 10:39PM | 27: 27: Rung Twelve – Him | Signed |
Oh what a way to end it-happy in each others arms!!! thank you so much for this story, it has been wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so very glad that you enjoyed the story and the morning after scenes I ended with! |
MollysSister | 2007.08.02 - 10:32PM | 26: 26: Rung Twelve – Her | Signed |
Holy hell woman that was one HOT sex scene! I appreciated the opening line as well "contraception?" That just reinforces that they are adults. I dont know if I can stand reading it from his POV, I might slide right off this chair. Yowza.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really happy that you liked the practicality of contraception being discussed and found the sex scene hot! |
MollysSister | 2007.08.02 - 10:23PM | 25: 25: Rung Eleven – Him | Signed |
My favorite sentence from this chapter is "I detect an irregularity in the rhythm of her breathing and scrutinize her visage peripherally." He sounds almost Vulcan!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed that sentence! |
MollysSister | 2007.08.02 - 10:19PM | 24: 24: Rung Eleven – Her | Signed |
How could I have lost track of this story? ((shakes head)) Well I am back sistah and I see its completed! Woot! I had to grimace at Hermione's mention of Stats. Ugh. the painful memories that brought back. Will the next chapter be naked? ((looks around hopefully))
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you found it again (even though you don't seem to expect scientists to talk science)! |
lauren6463 | 2007.07.03 - 05:17PM | 27: 27: Rung Twelve – Him | Signed |
i would just like to tell you...that is the best bit of fic i have read in a long time!
absolutely fab!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really happy to hear that you enjoyed it so much! |
FionaMin | 2007.06.26 - 05:31PM | 27: 27: Rung Twelve – Him | Signed |
Wow, this story was amazing. At times, the repetition made for slow reading, but it also created fantastic character development and a believable romance. Not to mention the ending two chapters were incredibly hot and well-written. The only thing that threw me off in the last chapter was Severus' mental word for Hermione's (since I don't know how explicit reviews can be) sexual organ. (It ended with -ny)
Otherwise, an absolutely fantastic read!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad that you liked the focus on character development and creating a realistic relationship! SS had been using that word since chapter 2 - I'm sorry you didn't like it - it's generally considered less offensive than the c word and I hate the p word. |
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