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Reviews for Ladder

Nichalia2007.04.01 - 04:18PM12: 12: Rung Six – HerAnonymous
26-03-2007 04:58 Rated 10

Hahaha, Hermione, be serious-- you can't resist our dour Potions Master! Especially since he kisses you so well...

Author's Response: Thanks! I know I couldn't resist, but I'm not engaged like she is! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Lusankaya2007.04.01 - 04:17PM12: 12: Rung Six – HerAnonymous
26-03-2007 00:51 Rated 10

this story is a-w-e-s-o-m-e!

please get the next chap up soon! ^^

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story! Next chapter already in queue.

Jade20992007.04.01 - 04:14PM12: 12: Rung Six – HerAnonymous
25-03-2007 20:05 Rated 10

I'll admit. At first I wasn't sure about this story, but the more I get into it the more I'm hooked. I absolutely love this Snape. There is something so dangerous and sexy about him that...we all have similar reactions to him that our Hermione does. *grin* I look forward to seeing where this goes.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you stuck with it long enough to give it a chance, though I'm also curious as to what was initially off putting. It's also good to hear that you like this characterization of Severus. He's up next!

devilish_misfit2007.04.01 - 04:13PM12: 12: Rung Six – HerAnonymous
25-03-2007 16:56 Rated 10

gods that was hot. Oh my God. You're really really good at this whole sexual tension thing.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so very glad you enjoyed it and found it sexy! More to come!

TESA2007.04.01 - 04:12PM12: 12: Rung Six – HerAnonymous
25-03-2007 12:50 Rated 10

I'm loving your narrative style and the alternating POV. Can't wait to see Snape's impression of the "incident"!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad that you're enjoying the story! It's also good to hear that the alternating POV's are working for you. You've got me curious though - what is it about my narrative style that works?

Reader's Response: It's a precarious balance between too much description and not enough. You've really struck a note with your concise, sharp narrative style and certain turns of phrases are rather original. I'm a fan of the "trail of ghostly phosphorence":) Your style satisfies my curiosity regarding the character's feelings, yet leaves some things to the reader's own imagination. Two chocolate frogs up!

Author's Response: Thanks for the info! It's funny that you talk about a balance of how much description to use because I have to force myself to put in even this much! Concise is a very nice way to put it. Thanks for noticing the turns of phrase - I try to work on those. I like leaving some ambiguity and 'work' for the reader to do - glad you like it.

jenn2007.04.01 - 04:12PM12: 12: Rung Six – HerAnonymous
25-03-2007 09:07 Rated 10

Wonderful, spectaular!!! That was so yummy!!!!!

You tease us so bad! Leaving us holding our breath like that!!!! But how to make you post soon!! I know, I should tempt you?

How's about a slice of Godiva's Chocolate Cheesecake from The Cheesecake Factory? Just think....rich, creamy, decadently smooth dark chocolate slice of cheescake....with a brownie crust. ;) Just think of the sinful pleasure of chocolate cheesecake with a crownie crust, topped with a dark chocolate ganuche(sp?) and covered in cocoa poweder.......

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!

I am I tempting you yet?

Author's Response: Thanks! Yep - my mouth is watering for chocolate and I haven't even had breakfast yet. Naughty woman!

I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter and the snog. The next one's already in queue, so you'll be able to see his side of things!

(goes to determine if there's any way to talk self into eating chocolate for breakfast)

Vampire_Princess2007.04.01 - 04:11PM12: 12: Rung Six – HerAnonymous
25-03-2007 05:27 Rated 9

going really well, but just wondering how you can make the story unique from here

I mean eventually she will have a "tough talk" with Ron, everyone turns against her, then she will fall into SS's arms...etc

Author's Response: Thanks! Actually I was going to have her beat Ron, toss him in the closet, and shag Severus against the door. (laughs) Seriously, I'm telling a story of humans reacting to situations - if you want to get down to it, Shakespeare has said it all, and he took material from earlier writers as well.

Harpijka2007.04.01 - 04:09PM11: 11: Rung Five – HimAnonymous
25-03-2007 00:32 Rated 10

Oh, how brilliant. The increasing tension, psychological verisimilitude... And humour, of course.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so very glad you're enjoying the story. There will be more UST and psychology to come! I'm also happy that you like how I also mix in humor.

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