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jenn2007.04.01 - 03:43PM7: 7: A Half Step between Rungs Three and FourAnonymous
13-03-2007 01:56 Rated 10

You Tease...not enough if you ask me.

I need more of those two....soon.

Author's Response: Thanks! The next set of six chapters are back to the regular format, so you'll have more focus on HG and then SS. Next chapter should be up soon. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

jbeaud2007.04.01 - 03:42PM7: 7: A Half Step between Rungs Three and FourAnonymous
12-03-2007 02:23 Rated 10

I am really enjoying the alternating perspectives on this story as well as the quickness with which you are posting your chapters. I also appreciate the fact that you are posting both points of view at the same time, so that I don't have to go back to re-read the previous chapter to keep it fresher. (Of course with the quality of the writing I am seeing here, that would be no hardship...) Finally, if you do hear of any place making or importing chocolate flake ice cream, please post it here!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad that you are enjoying the format of the story and the use of alternating POVs. The structure is somewhat experimental, so it's good to know it's working for some. Thanks as well for the comment on my writing!

The ice cream was inspired by Soy Delicious Purely Decadent Chocolate Obsession (I'm dairy intolerant). It's definitely available at big health food stores in the States and may have made it to the UK. It's chocolate with chocolate sauce and flake mixed in!

Maggie2007.04.01 - 03:42PM7: 7: A Half Step between Rungs Three and FourAnonymous
11-03-2007 21:18 Rated 10

Excellent. It shows where they are in their relationships, and why the other might come into mind....

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the chapter and the what the chapter does. You're right - I'm trying to show the cracks in their current relationships!

aliciana2007.04.01 - 03:41PM7: 7: A Half Step between Rungs Three and FourAnonymous
11-03-2007 18:54 Rated 10

Well Sweetie, I don't remember any goth nights but then I was a Kate Bush, Genesis, Pink Floyd, Supertramp sorta girl. But you have captured everything else perfectly. Sainsburys, Brocc and stilton soup...and what is this brilliant Flake ice-cream? Must look for that. I was at Tintagel last October and I have to say it is quite a magical place. Very atmospheric. And steep! Our labrador, Harley, refused to climb down the steps. Perhaps we should have Apparated him down. Oh yes you have done well...all the above and pillocks too. Now that is a good Lancs/Yorkshire word. Keep it up. That's an order! Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.

Author's Response: Thanks! While the soup and pasta were ones I ate regularly when I lived in London, I made up the ice cream! It was inspired by all those soft-serve cones of vanilla you can get with a Flake stuck in, though. I've been cliff walking on the coast of Whales, which I've been told is similar to Cornwall, which means it's beautiful. I'm really glad you liked the chapter! Next bits already in queue!

Vampire_Exotica2007.04.01 - 03:36PM6: 6: Rung Three – HimAnonymous
11-03-2007 04:25 Rated 10

Never mind the reviews these chapters are like chocolate and I seem to be quite addicted.

Looking forward to the next update!

Vampire_Exotica

(thaelixir.proboards49.com)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story as much as chocolate! I'll try to keep a regular infusion coming your way. (In fact, I think the next chapter is already up.)

fire wall2007.04.01 - 03:35PM6: 6: Rung Three – HimAnonymous
11-03-2007 03:52

Nothing like a resounding slap...wait a minute, she hit him!!!! Definitely a worthy opponent.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Yep - she slapped him, and it earned his respect and interest. But she doesn't know that (grins).

Prefiera de Gryfalco2007.04.01 - 03:35PM6: 6: Rung Three – HimAnonymous
10-03-2007 06:38 Rated 10

Just the perfect sort of Ashwinder story I need right now. Tension, tension, tension added in with wee bit of angst and a dash of fluff. I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. There will be lots of UST, and as you've noted, a mix of humor, angst, drama, etc.

jenn2007.04.01 - 03:34PM6: 6: Rung Three – HimAnonymous
10-03-2007 03:51 Rated 10

This story is so compelling!!! I love it!

I just love the first person narrative and I hope Snape finds out if she did conjure new undergarments or not. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story and the use of alternating 1st person POVs. Since this is going to be a drama (though it started with sex - grins), it might be a little while before knickers are seen. Hope you're along for the ride!

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