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Reviews for Fruit Of A Bitter Harvest

s50m2011.12.02 - 01:55PM8: Eight.Signed
That was a really lovely chapter. :) It was very sweet and I am enjoying seeing how Snape is adjusting to his new life. I particularly liked the line about Snape's "heart would never be lonely again." At the end, I was pretty worried that Snape would leave Hermione and Eli as a noble gesture, but I'm glad that you nipped that in the bud. I can't wait to read the next chapter! As always, fabulous job! :)

Author's Response: Hi s50m, no, no such noble (and foolish) gestures, I'm glad you are still enjoying it. Thanks for the review.

linn from IA2011.12.02 - 11:04AM8: Eight.Signed
What a lovely, lovely chapter. I admire how you show Severus growth and lingering fears, and Hermione's devotion. The Marriage Challenge Law is clearly evil, even with a silver lining -- it's the source of so much stiffness and insecurity, even in Severus & Hermione's meant-to-be-happy marriage. Plus baby Eli: I hope to see more of him!

Author's Response: Hi linn, Yes I wanted to show his unconscious growth and their interactions when relaxed. Glad your enjoying it thanks for the review

TeaOli2011.12.02 - 09:34AM8: Eight.Signed

Hands down, this is my favourite chapter yet!

I'm so eager to see what comes of Minerva's plan to extend Hogwart's into an institute of higher learning; I'd keep reading to see that bit develop alone.

But you've also given us more of Severus's growth, evidence that he hasn't yet comprehended how far he's grown, and you've given us a peek into what fatherhood is for him - even before the birth.

Thank you so, so much for the tiny glimpse into Hermione's thoughts. It was just enough to augment my understanding without taking away from the very Severusishness of the larger story. In lettingus see him through her eyes - even if it's just this once - you've let me understand so much better. And it was a beautiful thing to know her loyalty and friendship are so fiercely given.

Fruit... continues to be not only skillfully-wrought, but also has proven to be well-thought-out and beautifully-developed. Thank you for sharing it.

Author's Response: Hi TeaOli, I thought that stretching the pov a little would help with the story's understanding, and yes your feedback helped with that. I have always thought Hermione would be a friend for the bad times as well as good, always easy to be a friend in the good times, but the ones that stick around when the proverbial hits the fan, they are the stars. Thanks yet again for your review and sorry I took so long to answer but the last chapter had me busy with extra bits. Thanks S.


Sampdoria2011.12.02 - 07:40AM8: Eight.Signed
What a fantastic chapter, I loved it. Severus love for his son was wonderfully written, and Hermiones words to Severus at the end of the chapter was perfect!

Author's Response: Hi Sampdoria, thanks for the lovely review. I'm happy it pleased.

Jinxie2011.11.26 - 05:18PM7: SevenSigned
I enjoy the slow progression of Severus and Hermione's relationship, despite the situations they find themselves in. Severus is believably forming a hidden attahment to Hermione, while she feels friendship towards him. Yes, their child is an impetus to drive them closer to one another, but at the same time could potentially cause an even greater rift. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Author's Response: Hi Jinxie, thanks for sharing your thoughts. The next chapter is in the queue.

MsMoss2011.11.24 - 08:02PM7: SevenSigned
Poor Severus, definitely a bittersweet experience for the reader, as well. I'm enjoying this story a great deal, you've created a very vivid world, with well-drawn characters, all of which is thoughtfully written. The protests against the ministry and it's law are a wonderful addition to this ancient and ubiquitous fic challenge! Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Hi MsMoss, thank you for taking the time to review it is always good to hear peoples thoughts on the story.

MeliJ2011.11.23 - 04:42PM7: SevenSigned
Aww, twins! Are we going to see Hermione's side of feelings evolving?

Author's Response: Hi MeliJ, I'm limited by how much I can show of what Hermione feels because these are all flashbacks from Severus but stick around and we will see what happens.

Jong_Kahn2011.11.22 - 10:41PM7: SevenSigned
Since it's very easy for strongly opinionated women to assume one thing--which seems totally accurate, since they know their own minds--only to find out things are different than they surmised once they are awash with hormones, a lot more is possible than one would have previously believed. Spoken as a strong-willed, strongly opinionated woman who found things were not as she thought they would be, once her body changed. The world is bigger and more unexpected than we know.

Author's Response: :)

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