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| orm irian | 2011.12.25 - 04:28PM | 9: Final chapter | Signed |
| No tomatoes. The ending was beautiful, and beautifully apt.
I, personally, already know what Hermione's answer will be, so I'm not concerned for Severus. His heart is safe with her. Author's Response: Hi orm irian, Thank you for saying so and for reviewing. | |||
| SandyKinns | 2011.12.25 - 03:38AM | 9: Final chapter | Signed |
| I very much liked this story, thank you for writing! Author's Response: and thank you for reviewing. | |||
| Jong_Kahn | 2011.12.24 - 04:59AM | 9: Final chapter | Signed |
| First, let me say I really liked this story. I wondered why I hadn't posted a final review, then rereading this last chapter, I remembered. This line from your A/N: "Believe me, there have been times when I have been tempted to take it beyond where it ended, but I wanted to remain true to my original ending, I mean it was there for me from the start...". That reminded me so much of JKR knowing what her last chapter, last sentence was going to be at the end of DH--and I wasn't too happy with that, either! I want to say, "Oh for heavens sake--you're the writer! You can change that, go past it, if you want--you're the creator!" But it's not that unsatisfying. Like Mikimoto, I can dream that there's a lovely wedding, of whatever size Hermione (and ideally, Severus) can prefer, with a nice stable life for Eli and whatever sisters or brothers may come along after. A nice stable life for all of them, inasmuch as it's possible. So thank you for all your work, and if there's a sequel, I look forward to it, especially since it's from both perspectives, as you say. Have a lovely holiday! Author's Response: Hi Jong_Kahn, Ah but I really liked the ending, and as I though about whether or not to take it past that point it seemed to me that to do so needed both POV rather than just Severus's memories. Glad you enjoyed it though and it is a lovely dream you have for them. Thank you for the holiday wishes, I hope yours was also good. | |||
| coolarrow7 | 2011.12.22 - 08:18PM | 9: Final chapter | Signed |
| Great story. Thanks for posting it! Author's Response: Thank you coolarrow7. | |||
| Mikimoto | 2011.12.21 - 09:32PM | 9: Final chapter | Signed |
| I know I have what I hope. I hope she signs it and then she and he marry with a beautiful wedding of their own free will, with a romantic honeymoon filled with kisses, and all of the horror of the first marriage is erased. I hope she gets her dream of the beautiful dress and her father walking her down the aisle, with her beloved groom unable to take his eyes off of her. Every girl should have that, even practical girls like Hermione. That is what I am going to imagine will happen next. Thank you for the lovely story of acceptance. Author's Response: Hi Mikimoto, lovely after story you have imagined, thanks for reading and reviewing. S | |||
| loreen77 | 2011.12.21 - 08:34PM | 9: Final chapter | Signed |
| Loved it. No throwing veggie ( or fruit if you are a botonist) from me. I felt the ending was perfect. This is his journey to fall in love and to know thst if letting her go will make her happy then he will do it. I think that is the truest most unselfish thing ever. I also have an ending in mind of how i believe that fated conversation will go. 10+++ Author's Response: Hi loreen 77, what can I say, thanks for all your reviews and I'm happy that it pleased you . Thanks S | |||
| loreen77 | 2011.12.21 - 08:04PM | 8: Eight. | Signed |
| Good, it was about time someine took him to task for not seeing the good parts of himself. Author's Response: Hi loreen77, yes, and Hermione is just the girl to do it. | |||
| loreen77 | 2011.12.21 - 07:40PM | 7: Seven | Signed |
| Ugh, the physical contact would have been the petfect excuse to share a bad everynight. Alas, severus seems to feel he does not deserve it and fears telling her hr,e wants it. Author's Response: Could be, thanks for the review. | |||
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