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Reviews for Fruit Of A Bitter Harvest

adelgado2011.10.24 - 12:44PM3: ThreeSigned
Like the slow grow of possible friendship. thanks for writing

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing.

loreen772011.10.20 - 09:38PM3: ThreeSigned
So sad. I am glad they find a level of friendship, but there is so far to go to be comfortable with thhe forced sex (if that is even possible).

Author's Response: Very true, very true.

loreen772011.10.20 - 09:14PM1: OneSigned
Sad, angst, and such raw emotion in so few words. Great start.

Author's Response: Hi loreen77, Thank you for the review, it is always great to find out if your intentions in writing come across to others.

verasuspense2011.10.20 - 08:33PM3: ThreeSigned
I can understand sex by Ministry mandate being a total turnoff for Hermione; they suit each other so well in every other way that I hope they will be set free, and that liberation will enable Hermione to feel arousal for the first time.

Author's Response: Hi verasuspense, Yes I think you have hit the key point , whilst she likes Severus (or is getting to like and know him) the huge elephant in the room is the element of compulsion. Thanks for the review.

MeliJ2011.10.18 - 06:42PM3: ThreeSigned
It's so sad reading this story sometimes, but I'm really enjoying it because it's so honest to how they really feel and to how much work it takes to create a real relationship. Great job :)

Author's Response: Hi, I'm glad it is coming across as real. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

scribbler7142011.10.18 - 09:10AM3: ThreeSigned
The moody, thoughtful tone is so apt here for your Severus -- the poor guy is trying to decode what it is to have a relationship, especially one under these circumstances. I'm wondering a bit about Hermione's reaction to the kiss -- it might signal more than it seems on the surface. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Hi scribbler714, yes I think the learning curve for Severus is a fairly steep one, let's face it he hasn't exactly had a lot of functional adult relationships. At least he is trying. The next part should be posted Sunday, I'm just adding a few bits to it. Thanks for your enthusiasm. S.

vze57t9j2011.10.18 - 05:04AM2: TwoSigned
Yay!!! Apologies are always the best policies, even if they're a bit on the frugal side and a tad late at that. At least they're back on track! The regulated physical intimacy will always be the elephant in the room. It has to be the most difficult part of their relationship. I give them credit for being honest with one another about how it makes them feel. Great chapter! :D

Author's Response: Hi again, Yep, you are right there, one huge elephant in the room possibly an entire herd of the beasts. Thanks for reviewing.

vze57t9j2011.10.18 - 04:41AM2: TwoSigned
Ouch! It's going to take a bit of time and tact to remedy this situation. It was bound to happen, but it couldn't have come (as these things often do) at a worse time. Excellent chapter!!! :D

Author's Response: Hi, yes he definitely led with both feet here. Thanks for another review, they do give me a warm fuzzy feeling.

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