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Reviews for Fruit Of A Bitter Harvest

jdemille2011.12.12 - 06:09PM8: Eight.Signed
Such a lovely tale you have woven. I'm eager to see what comes next...this last chapter especially breaks my heart and makes me smile at the same time!

Author's Response: Hi jdemille, I'm so happy you are enjoying my story, I am adding the next chapter to the queue tonight.

Jong_Kahn2011.12.08 - 11:39AM8: Eight.Signed
" 'You always have been one to let people see your demons far more clearly than the better angels of your soul.’ " How very true, Hermione! I love seeing how you entwine Severus, Hermione and now Eli increasingly together. I look forward to seeing how you may finally get Severus and Hermione to admit their feelings to each other. Thank you for another well-written chapter.

Author's Response: Hi Jong_Kahn, Thanks, as always your reviews are a treat and a mood lifter. Thanks.

Wintersong2011.12.04 - 11:25AM8: Eight.Signed
Such a powerful and beautiful story. The quietness of their growing regard for each other speaks volumes. I love the way your Severus seems to be caught between his own opinion of himself and Hermione's admiration and growing feelings for him. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Ah, but then I think that given his life his knowledge of his abilities would be accurate but his opinion of himself would be distorted by those same events. Thanks for the review.

MsTree2011.12.03 - 07:24PM8: Eight.Signed
Such a beautiful chapter. Severus' love for his family shines through. Oh yes, by the way, give Minerva catnip rather than liquor on her next birthday. ^_^

Author's Response: and a scratching post :) Thanks for the review.

adelgado2011.12.03 - 11:06AM8: Eight.Signed
Lovely.

Author's Response: Thank you, adelgado.

Zinoviya2011.12.03 - 02:37AM8: Eight.Signed
Such a lovely story. Sure, it's a slow build up, but I find these the more realistic. I'm quite touched by it.

Author's Response: Hi Zinoviya, thank you for saying so and for reviewing.

MeliJ2011.12.02 - 05:02PM8: Eight.Signed
That was beautiful :) And I really love how Hermione tries to make him see how mch more good there is in himself than he thinks.

Author's Response: Hi MeliJ, I'm happy it pleased, thanks for reviewing.

FieryPen372011.12.02 - 01:58PM8: Eight.Signed
(Contented sigh) I love this story. Severus' syntax and diction is perfect and his hesitant, guarded adoration for Eli and Hermione. One thing, I think there was a mistake: I think you meant 'humanity's' history, not 'humanities.' I also love the idea of Hogwarts being a semi-sentient thing, and accepting Eli into its protection just as it did for Severus. Great work, keep it up! And dial up the romancyness any time you feel like it!

Author's Response: Hi FieryPen37, thanks for the catch, in the words of a cartoon character,'Doh.'

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