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| TequilaNervous | 2011.10.17 - 02:07AM | 2: Two | Signed |
| I like this story very much and I hope you update it soon. I have a question, is there any way to put in on alert as is in FF? I mean, how can I know this story had been updated? Thanks!!! Author's Response: Hi, Thanks for saying so, Chapter three is up on the site, but I don't think the site alerts like FF does. If you really want to know when it updates then drop me an e mail or pm and I will let you know. Thanks S. | |||
| KellyJoy | 2011.10.16 - 03:05PM | 2: Two | Signed |
| So sad to watch Severus undo the fragile camaraderie they built up after the awards ceremony. But then a relationship with him can never be easy. Author's Response: Hi KellyJoy, yes I don't think he would be the easiest of company what will happen, well now that would be telling. thanks for the review. | |||
| WnL624 | 2011.10.16 - 11:30AM | 2: Two | Signed |
| Very believable progression, and all the more satisfying are the poignant prose and the little details littering this wonderful piece of writing. Thank you. Author's Response: Hi WnL624, sometimes there are reviews that make you smile and do the happy dance, thank you for giving me one of those. | |||
| Jong_Kahn | 2011.10.14 - 11:00PM | 2: Two | Signed |
| I don't know how the simplicity of your descriptions made me cry, but they did. First I was touched that Severus was as supportive as he was; then I cried that he was the opposite...and that he possibly might have learned something, from that sour whisky and stale sandwich. Excellent work. I do look forward to the next, and cross my fingers it will be comparatively soon! Thank you. Author's Response: Hi Jong_Kahn, Thanks for the lovely review. We will just have to see if Severus has learned anything. The next chapter is in the queue. I was hoping to add chapter four to the queue tomorrow as well, but the pesky thing just demanded a bit more so I am adding a little here and there. Thanks for reading and reviewing. | |||
| Jong_Kahn | 2011.10.14 - 10:37PM | 1: One | Signed |
| I'm rereading this to refresh my memory for the feel of it, not just for the actions and interactions that happened. I don't know how a musician, I missed this sentence: "Though the gossip regarding the couple had been quelled, the wave of uneasy apprehension it evoked in the older students thrummed through the school like a dissonant tritone." Great phrase, "thrummed...like a dissonant tritone"! Of course, there is no other kind. But the fact that it could not fit into normal harmony gave the tritone the nickname "Diabolus in musica"-'-the devil in music'. Here's hoping you get Hermione and Severus to ultimately get into emotional consonance. On to the second chapter! Author's Response: Hi, the phrase was originally something like 'thrummed through the school like the electrical charge just before a storm.' Then I happened to listen to some, how shall I phrase this politely, music that only a musician would appreciate. Being only a part time dabbler it set the fillings in my teeth on edge and so the phrase was changed. In the end I should be grateful to the devil's music as it improved my image I think. As for emotional consonance, well now that would be telling. Thanks for the review, they are always appreciated. | |||
| SerafineSnape | 2011.10.14 - 10:00PM | 2: Two | Signed |
| Wow. One step forward, one step back. Loving this story. Keep up the great work. Author's Response: As all dances go, SerafineSnape, they are nothing without the back and fore flow. Thanks for reviewing. Hope you enjoy the rest. S | |||
| greenwood | 2011.10.14 - 08:59PM | 2: Two | Signed |
| Oh I loved this chapter too. You can really tell how they are struggling to survive this union (it seems more her than him however) and yet there are glimmers of caring from Severus to Hermione. I keep thinking back to the first chapter and fear that the paper Severus has just signed is their divorce paper. Author's Response: Thank you greenwood, but, to use an American phrase, I will have to take the fifth on what might have been signed. I wanted very much to show a relationship that was not quick and not easy given the fact that neither of the two people in it wanted it. Thanks for the review they help keep me scribbling. | |||
| onegirl | 2011.10.14 - 07:10PM | 2: Two | Signed |
| I enjoy your story. It is a new and interesting take on the much used MLC. Your style is great and you create nice tension and atmosphere. Can't wait for more. Author's Response: Hi onegirl, thank you for saying that it is a new take, believe me it was a long time in writing and re- writing and re-writing the re-writing. I hope you will enjoy the rest. The next part is in the queue. Thanks for hitting the review button.S | |||
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