Reviews for Repaying The Life Debt
Tangerine Dream | 2008.07.12 - 04:14PM | 3: Only The Second Week | Signed |
I like the way the story si unfolding around this list!
Author's Response: Thanks, I thought it would be fun to not only use my vocab list but draft a romance too. |
Tangerine Dream | 2008.07.12 - 04:13PM | 2: His New Apprentice | Signed |
I like this idea and the word list! Very challenging.
Author's Response: Yes, I'm having loads of fun with it. |
Tangerine Dream | 2008.07.12 - 04:12PM | 1: Repaying The Life Debt | Signed |
Very well written and clever too.
Author's Response: Thank you. |
shaaelia | 2008.07.12 - 05:09AM | 15: Three Months And One Week | Signed |
Love this story! I am really looking forward to the next update.
Very clever use of words - you make it flow together really well.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. |
The Grim | 2008.07.12 - 12:42AM | 15: Three Months And One Week | Signed |
Funny, she leaves just as Sev gets there. Hopefully he catches up to her and they continue something better elsewhere. ;) Update soon!
Author's Response: The problem is that you only get to see a snippet of each Friday, unless I also give you a Sat snippet. So you can fill in the blanks, I suppose. You'll see, things aren't too bad.
Author's Response: Hermione Apparated to her flat, looking up at the dark building, but her mind was still consumed with thoughs of Severus Snape. 'Damn, why didn't he? I had hoped... but then you didn't ask him did you?' She turned on the spot, deciding to go ask him anyway. "Oh just pluck up the courage. Maybe I can talk him into it," she said to herself as she Apparated to his home, er, lab.
Severus stood on the spot where Hermione had just vanished, wishing there was a tracking spell of some kind to enable him to follow her. Julinne Whitby and Sturgis Podmore were coming outside, and Severus chose to Apparate to Spinner's End rather than to see them snogging. He arrived just as someone else did, mumbling to herself '...maybe I can talk him into it?'
"Talk him into what, Miss Granger?" he answered smoothly, amused as she spun around startled.
"To dance," she exclaimed. "How? I -are - hi."
He smiled as he pulled her into his arms. "I'd love to," he replied and Apparated them inside his house. |
The Grim | 2008.07.04 - 04:49AM | 14: Her Thirteenth Week | Signed |
FINALLY they kissed! (Hahaha). Update soon!
Author's Response: Yep they did. My beta has last weeks and I just got the list for next...
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sophie | 2008.07.02 - 07:13AM | 14: Her Thirteenth Week | Signed |
Great chapter...I think they get better every time! Sx
Author's Response: Thank you very much. |
sandstar08 | 2008.06.25 - 11:28AM | 13: Her Twelfth Week | Signed |
what an interesting life debt story! very original story-telling style on an overdone standard... well done!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm having a good time writing it. |
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