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Reviews for Repaying The Life Debt

Shiro Ryu2008.06.23 - 10:51PM13: Her Twelfth WeekSigned
I am thoroughly enjoying this story. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

miamadwyn2008.06.23 - 07:40AM13: Her Twelfth WeekSigned
So very, very nice to see him beginning to succumb. Squeee!

Author's Response: Thank you. Yep, he is slowly and with reservations, but swaying in her direction. As if he stood a chance?

neelix2008.06.23 - 02:56AM13: Her Twelfth WeekSigned
Finally... things are moving on!!! I love this...looking forward tothe next update.

Author's Response: Thank you. Oh it moves forward... boy it will. He's resisting, but she's a goal in mind.

The Grim2008.06.13 - 02:56AM12: Her Eleventh WeekSigned
Yay, round 3 of beaweasley's updates. Good, short and sweet. Update soon. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'll update as soon as my beta reads my next drabble!

Rainbow2008.06.07 - 05:46AM10: Her Ninth WeekSigned
Not I'm really confused. If Hermione isn't Hermione Weasley, then why does the summary say: This was not what Severus expected when he confronted Hermione Weasley about payment of his life debt. Regardless, I really love this story! XD

Author's Response: Ok, the reason I used Hermione Weasley is because Severus thought she was married to Ron when he confronted her about the life debt repayment. He did not want to be indebted to a Weasley. (hint scan the reviews - the answer was a bouns I hid there. Or go to my friends page on LiveJournal and you can see them there.) Hermione never married Ron... but the Daily Prophet said they had.

The Grim2008.06.07 - 04:17AM11: It’s Been Two MonthsSigned
Ribald...that one was my favorite. It's hilarious. Update spon, good kissing fun, yay!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I was told that not everyone sees the reveiw bonuses, so I put this weeks in the chapter. I hope you haven't missed the others!

mizie2008.06.02 - 07:15PM10: Her Ninth WeekSigned
This story is BRILLIANT! And it makes me feel perty smart figgurin it out...;) Great job!

Author's Response: You are very welcome. Oh, here's a bit more!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~May 24~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Severus watched her as she finished for the night and left to go read in his sitting room. The potion Lucius wanted could take him three days to brew, and most of the questionable ingredients were combined in the first two days, leaving only the innocuous ingredients for the following two days when she would be in the lab with him. Still, he knew that it would be best if Lucius returned on a Saturday to acquire his purchase.

‘The Ramora scales, or silver fish if one is being discreet, and the aqueous humor of the Erumpent horn had been quite expensive, but still I will make a healthy profit on the potion. Besides, now that Plitheroa had met Ms. Granger, she will be able to go to the shop instead of me,’ he thought as he walked to his sitting room. ‘Plitheroa knew better than to sell me less desirable quality ingredients, what with the secret I share with her. That, and she didn’t grope me with Ms. Granger in attendance. Having a female apprentice is turning out to be a good thing…’

Severus was stunned as he opened the door to the sitting room. Ms. Granger was standing before the fire, scanning a book, wearing her nightshirt with one of her silky dressing robes, untied, hanging open, and exposing her long, lithe legs. In fact, there was very little of her body not exposed as the light of the fire, which made her attire all but transparent. Severus quickly backed out of the room, closing the door softly and swore. His body had reacted strongly the moment he’d seen her, and his heart was still racing in his chest. ‘Mother of Merlin, that girl! Why in all Hades can she not understand that I am merely a man with urges, however primeval, and she simply cannot parade herself around a man’s house dressed like a whore in a bordello! And that attire is only suitable for a boudoir.’ The thought of having Ms. Granger in his bedroom hit him, and he had to literally shake his head to clear the image of Hermione lounging in her nightshirt on his bed. ‘That’s it – I’m going to take a cold shower and then bring the insipid girl one of my dressing robes to wear,’ he thought as he stormed upstairs to his father’s room. Severus watched her as she finished for the night and left to go read in his sitting room. The potion Lucius wanted could take him three days to brew, and most of the questionable ingredients were combined in the first two days, leaving only the innocuous ingredients for the following two days when she would be in the lab with him. Still, he knew that it would be best if Lucius returned on a Saturday to acquire his purchase. The Ramora scales, or silver fish if one is being discreet, and the aqueous humor of the Erumpent horn had been quite expensive, but still I will make a healthy profit on the potion. Besides, now that Plitheroa had met Ms. Granger, she will be able to go to the shop instead of me, he thought as he walked to his sitting room. Plitheroa knew better than to sell me less desirable quality ingredients, what with the secret I share with her. That, and she didn’t grope me with Ms. Granger in attendance. Having a female apprentice is turning out to be a good thing… Severus was stunned as he opened the door to the sitting room. Ms. Granger was standing before the fire, scanning a book, wearing her nightshirt with one of her silky dressing robes, untied, hanging open, and exposing her long, lithe legs. In fact, there was very little of her body not exposed as the light of the fire, which made her attire all but transparent. Severus quickly backed out of the room, closing the door softly and swore. His body had reacted strongly the moment he’d seen her, and his heart was still racing in his chest. Mother of Merlin, that girl! Why in all Hades can she not understand that I am merely a man with urges, however primeval, and she simply cannot parade herself around a man’s house dressed like a whore in a bordello! And that attire is only suitable for a boudoir. The thought of having Ms. Granger in his bedroom hit him, and he had to literally shake his head to clear the image of Hermione lounging in her nightshirt on his bed. That’s it – I’m going to take a cold shower and then bring the insipid girl one of my dressing robes to wear, he thought as he stormed upstairs to his father’s room.

funny music2008.06.02 - 09:54AM10: Her Ninth WeekSigned
I'm probably stupid, but I don't really understand why Hermione "Weasley" is trying to seduce Severus Snape and why is Ginny helping her?

Author's Response: No you're not stupid. Hermione isn't Hermione Weasely. She's still Hermione Granger - I haven't explained the why yet. Hermione has decided to give a try for Severus and her friends, Ginny and Luna know about it. Have you missed any of the added tidbits I stuck in the reveiws? If so, these drabbles are also on my LiveJounal under the same name.

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