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Reviews for Repaying The Life Debt

fynnsmom2010.04.17 - 01:31PM10: Her Ninth WeekSigned
I like Lucius a lot. I hope they don't kill him off in the movie version of DH. So why does he need a skin potion? And why is it such a big secret? I loved his term "gentlewizards' club." When I started this story I wasn't that excited about it but it's really growing on me. I enjoy watching Hermione's obvious plotting and Severus' denial of what she's doing. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I think there is a lot to Lucius, that could sway either good- or bad-boy if the writer chooses. I worked in a Dermatology office and there are rashes, fungals, and warts that appear down there... you know... that guys don't like mentioning but need help curing. It's probably a simple rash. lol I'm glad that you are starting to enjoy the story more as you go along. . . . Have you found the extra bits in the reviews? . . . .Thank you for reading and for the review.

fynnsmom2010.04.17 - 12:31PM9: Her Eighth WeekSigned
Severus is in such denial. He's trying to tell himself that he's working with Hermione for her own good but he's getting interested in her as a woman. Great chapter.

Author's Response: LOL Yep, exactly. Hugs and smoochies for the review.

fynnsmom2010.04.17 - 12:22PM8: Her Seventh WeekSigned
You know, I think Severus has been answering to two masters for so long he doesn't quite know what he wants. I also think that Hermione is going to get the best of him. She strikes me as being very patient and stubborn. Great chapter.

Author's Response: That is exactly how I wrote it. lol Thank you for the review. :D

fynnsmom2010.04.17 - 12:16PM7: Her Sixth WeekSigned
How sweet--they're going out to eat. Somehow I have a feeling that Hermione knows that he wasn't really inviting her out but took advantage of the situation. And he thought she had no Slytherin characteristics:D Great chapter.

Author's Response: LOL Yes, she's going for what she wants. Thank you for the review, doll.

fynnsmom2010.04.11 - 12:53PM6: Her Fifth WeekSigned
I think if Hermione melted a cauldron and their agreement was terminated, Severus would miss her very much. He's taking way too much interest in what she's wearing:D Great chapter.

Author's Response: Yep, and he's too distracted by it. teehehe Thank you for the review, doll.

fynnsmom2010.04.11 - 10:35AM5: Her Fourth WeekSigned
I'll bet that there's something wrong with Severus' instructions. At the least, he was acting so cranky that she didn't even want to ask him to clarify. Oh oh, Ron's starting to get jealous. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Yes, he loved her mentioning something that Ron can up with. LOL . . . Oh before I forget - there are hidden extras in the reviews, like with chapter 8, 9, and so on... little extras. hint hint. teehehehe.

fynnsmom2010.04.11 - 10:14AM4: The Third WeekSigned
Hermione is kind of stubborn. That's a good thing. I might have gotten hurt feelings and gave up by now. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Oh yes, she's stubborn and she's very used to dealing with boys (Ron and Harry weren't always easy to deal with either. ;D ) I'm glad you are enjoying this one, too. Thank you for the review.

fynnsmom2010.04.11 - 10:03AM3: Only The Second WeekSigned
This story is just making my day. It's so humorous and charming. Severus is trying so hard to discourage Hermione and she's just ignoring his efforts. I chuckled as Severus reacted to one of Ron's suggestions. So Hermione hasn't seen his house yet? I'll bet it's huge and wonderful. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad that it's making your day. thank you very much for the review. Happy reading.

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