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Reviews for Repaying The Life Debt

fynnsmom2010.04.11 - 09:53AM2: His New ApprenticeSigned
I chuckled at the end when Severus thought he could sleep OK with Hermione in the room. I'll bet that doesn't last long. I also smiled because it seems he's trying to make her as uncomfortable as possible, hoping she'd give up. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Oh yes, he is trying to make her quit. if she does, then he's off the hook. lol Thank you for reading, doll.

fynnsmom2010.04.10 - 04:35PM1: Repaying The Life DebtSigned
I thought I'd at least start on this. Did Severus call Hermione Mrs. Weasley? And, she must have saved him? So far, so good. I love starting a new story. It holds so much promise, so much hope. I may read off and on. I have things to do around the house so I can play a little bit tomorrow. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Yes, he did. teehehe Oh, he obviously survived. I hope you liek this one. Thank you for the review.

temeraire2010.01.13 - 03:21PM11: It’s Been Two MonthsSigned
A kiss that "lasts a few minutes"? That's quite a kiss for a first kiss…  But no more of that – I hereby declare that I love the story!

Author's Response: Oops, oh, and thank you for reading this and for the review!

temeraire2010.01.13 - 03:13PM11: It’s Been Two MonthsSigned
A kiss that "lasts a few minutes"? That's quite a kiss for a first kiss…  But no more of that – I hereby declare that I love the story!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Yep, I think he liked kissing her. lol

FireBlade2009.03.13 - 12:19PM20: Her Nineteenth WeekSigned
Very well done, I am glad that I have stopped by to read this. I liked how Severus couldn't guess Hermione's plot for him, even though it was obvious, until she pretty much laid it out on the table. Great job with the vocabulary integrated into the story.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I hope you also went and found the hidden goodies (extra bits) hidden in the reviews? They add a bit more color to the story! Thank you very much for the kind review and for giving this vocab lesson a go! =;)

Jadedx1FastLude2009.01.30 - 01:29AM2: His New ApprenticeSigned
My dad has PCV. What saddens me, is that, even though his blood is perfectly good blood and he just makes too much of it, they don't use it for anything. Blood centers, at least in Washington state, just toss the blood from phlebotomies. I like using the word plethora. Just felt like giving my 2 cents. I'm curious as to when, after 7th year, this story would take place? I'm hoping that I'll discover that as I read on.

Author's Response: Oh, doll, that's an easy question! This story begins after Hermione finished school - after she'd returned to finish her seventh year. (btw - a tip, always check the reviews as you read. At one point I started adding bonus bits and extra stuff with the first review I recieved! Hope you don't miss them!)

Valkyria Prince2008.10.31 - 01:20AM9: Her Eighth WeekSigned
HI. I think this is a great story by most rights but Im really not into PP challenges. It would be cool if you ever decided to re-word or re-write and put it in another category! Not tha there's anything wrong, I just think your good plotline would receive better exposure if it had another forum! Thanks

Author's Response: I'm sorry to hear that. You might miss out on some really good stories in that case. The point was to write a story using the vocabulary words, so re-write isn't an option, and obviously I can't re-word since I'm supposed to use them. But you gave this one a chance and read it, which I do appreciate, and I'm thankful that you were willing to leave me such nice compliments in your review. So I suppose you'll forego my funny 'A Slytherin Prank Gone Askew?' LOL That's all right. I've others... Thank you for the reivew.

Tangerine Dream2008.10.11 - 08:50AM20: Her Nineteenth WeekSigned
Wonderful ending and a great read! My vocabulary has strengthened considerably!

Author's Response: Thank you. I will have another Dictionary Drabble (only it's longer than a drabble) to post soon.

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