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Reviews for Repaying The Life Debt

The Grim2008.06.02 - 03:57AM10: Her Ninth WeekSigned
Oooooooh, more! Interesting tidbit, can't wait to see what happens when she goes to the store!

Author's Response: Well, can't say yet. But here is what happened the night before!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~May 23~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hermione paced her room, furious and frustrated at Severus Snape. Spread out on her bed were several books and magazines, each one providing fail proof methods on how to get your man, and a journal Hermione had started full of helpful advice, mostly those she thought would work on Severus.

Luna sat cross-legged on the bed as well, thumbing through the Cosmo in her hands. “This seems far too complicated. Tickle his balls? Hmm.” She dropped the magazine. “I think you should simply tell him you like him. Although, he might not believe you. He’ll get acerbic, objurgate you as his inferior, and then he’ll be furious and cloy, but you have to stop using subterfuge.”

“Thank you,” Hermione said, whirling around to face her friend. “I’m aware that he’ll be furious when he finds out, I just hope that when he does he’ll understand why.”

“You’ve been diffident, right? You should be more direct with him and stop being obsequious,” Luna suggested. “Men have certain innate needs that must be met before they truly feel connected to you,” she read aloud. “Performing concrete tasks is a way of bonding that enhances his sense of success. Ask his opinion. Wear soft materials.”

“I’ve been doing that,” Hermione stated.

“Don his clothes.”

“Luna, you’re brilliant!” Hermione beamed.

“Thank you.”


Author's Response: Well, can't say yet. But here is what happened the night before!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~May 23~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Hermione paced her room, furious and frustrated at Severus Snape. Spread out on her bed were several books and magazines, each one providing fail proof methods on how to get your man, and a journal Hermione had started full of helpful advice, mostly those she thought would work on Severus.

Luna sat cross-legged on the bed as well, thumbing through the Cosmo in her hands. “This seems far too complicated. Tickle his balls? Hmm.” She dropped the magazine. “I think you should simply tell him you like him. Although, he might not believe you. He’ll get acerbic, objurgate you as his inferior, and then he’ll be furious and cloy, but you have to stop using subterfuge.”

“Thank you,” Hermione said, whirling around to face her friend. “I’m aware that he’ll be furious when he finds out, I just hope that when he does he’ll understand why.”

“You’ve been diffident, right? You should be more direct with him and stop being obsequious,” Luna suggested. “Men have certain innate needs that must be met before they truly feel connected to you,” she read aloud. “Performing concrete tasks is a way of bonding that enhances his sense of success. Ask his opinion. Wear soft materials.”

“I’ve been doing that,” Hermione stated.

“Don his clothes.”

“Luna, you’re brilliant!” Hermione beamed.

“Thank you.”

neelix2008.05.28 - 09:28AM9: Her Eighth WeekSigned
This is really fun! I can't wait for Hermione to get her man! Thanks!

Author's Response: You are very welcome. First, teard down his walls. Second,make him notice me. Third, make him realize I wnat him to... HG
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~x~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It had only been three days after the final battle when Ron had made his first sexual advance toward her, the day before Hermione had met a Seer in Middleton Glen. Hermione had simply asked if the woman knew how to find the Creevey house, showing the letter she’d received regarding Colin’s funeral. The woman was giving her directions when it had happened. “It’s across town. Just past the post office, make a left on Dilmore Lane, continue about three blocks,” she said, but then her voice changed, and she added, “Who you are with, you are destined not. Seek above you, the one you respect and admire. Your cloy, obdurate intended will repine for your hand, though he considers himself unworthy. Have fortitude and the life he owes will be requite by your love.” Then she continued as if the moment never happened, “past Willow Street, and you’ll see Pine.”

For three weeks, the memory of the Seer haunted her.

For those same weeks, Ron perused her, persistently. Hermione kept putting him off, even tolerating his whining, prodding, and finally his tirade about how often Harry was ‘getting it’ from Ginny. Of course that only made Hermione dig in her heels and refuse him outright.

So Ron proposed.

At a party.

In front of everyone.

The next morning Hermione woke up to find that the dream she’d been having of being attacked by a bugbear was actually Ron, on top of her, groping, grasping, and slobbering on her body, his penis prodding at her entrance. Needless to say, her first time was quite a shock and not exactly what she’d expected it to be. At least it hadn’t hurt too much.

The same morning, Hermione received the owl informing her that she’d been granted permission to take her N.E.W.T.s and her supplemental packet with her study guide.

Since there were so many in that year that hadn’t attended Hogwarts, there was a mass confusion regarding the returning students. For anyone, first through sixth years, who’d missed the year of instruction because they were denied admittance, had the choice of being held back a year or receiving extra lessons to catch up on their spellwork and course studies. Those who missed their seventh year and wanted their N.E.W.T.s were provided with the option of tutorial assistance on weekends or attendance at Hogwarts. Hermione had originally opted for the enrollment in Hogwarts, excited to be returning. Since Harry was serious of becoming an Auror, he too had reluctantly enrolled for his seventh year as well, but Ron had only enrolled in the weekend program. However, the Auror training program coordinator had contacted both Ron and Harry, offering them admittance based upon their ‘record of excellence in defeating Voldemort, and subsequent abilities valuable to the safety of the wizarding society in general.’

And it was on that same morning that the Daily Prophet had announced Hermione’s engagement to Ronald Weasley, which Hermione hadn’t even accepted, yet.

Not only that, but a very long article by Norman Ditlow describing Hermione’s involvements in the events that had led up to the final battle and her heroics during the skirmishes, filled up the entire second and third pages of the Daily Prophet. The extensive article was well substantiated with quotes from anyone and everyone who’d seen her that day, including every rumor, hearsay and supposition the reporter could dug up, including the fact that Hermione had saved Severus Snape’s life.

And since it seemed that the Fates and destiny were focused on her, it had also been on that fateful day that Hermione had found out Severus Snape was brewing potions again. So she opted to owl him, to wish him well, since she had no idea how to approach the man.

Queen Celestia2008.05.21 - 11:20PM8: Her Seventh WeekSigned
Is it the next week yet? : D

Author's Response: I have May 17th's with my beta for clean up. So I added a bonus in the reviews. I may do that from time to time as a little extra!

Queen Celestia2008.05.21 - 11:16PM7: Her Sixth WeekSigned
Sneaky Hermione.

Author's Response: Oh, yes, boy is she! Did you catch the bit in the review in the last weeks?

Queen Celestia2008.05.21 - 11:04PM5: Her Fourth WeekSigned
I still like it. : D Although Ron is being a real wanker.

Author's Response: Yes, he is. But that's Ron in my book. Don't forget to check the reciews, I'm hiding things in them!

Queen Celestia2008.05.21 - 10:55PM3: Only The Second WeekSigned
I really like this story. Short chapters though. D:

Author's Response: Thankyou very much. It's only supposed to be 100 words/short drabbles each time - that's the challenge. I added a second one for myself - make a saga story from is as well! Check the reivews- there is a bonus !

The Grim2008.05.21 - 02:23AM8: Her Seventh WeekSigned
Yay!!!! Oh, that was fun! :D Thanks for the treat, it was a nice surprise, and I hope to be surprised even more soon... ;)

Author's Response: My beta has the next one and as soon as we clean up my mess - I'll post! As for the bonus, whoever leaves me my first review will have another 'bonus bit' ! I'm glad you liked the added bit fro this one!

NotSly2008.05.19 - 06:58AM5: Her Fourth WeekSigned
This works so well with Snape.

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

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