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Reviews for Repaying The Life Debt

sexaddict2008.10.03 - 11:49AM20: Her Nineteenth WeekSigned
Loved the story, but where do the ratings come in to play. I noticed one or two chapters rated wanton or lascivious but nothing warranted the rating.

Author's Response: I dunno. I was typing this on the fly each week based upon what the words were. Soyy about that.

orm irian2008.08.31 - 03:56PM20: Her Nineteenth WeekSigned
Very nice. An enjoyable tale with a nice fluffy ending. Just the thing to elevate my mood on a dull day!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Yes, I wanted a fluffy happily ever alfter ending. I'm glad it elevated your day. Thank you for the review.

Moepi2008.08.31 - 09:53AM14: Her Thirteenth WeekSigned
Sorry I'm not quite sure, but is choler a native english word or is it transcribed from French as in colère which means anger, if that was the case I think the spelling might be off. By the way great story, and very instructive Cheers Moepi AKA Michèle

Author's Response: I'm not sure. The words are from dictionary.com and are posted on Potter_Place as the Potter_Place Dictionary Drabble Challenge. New words are posted each week, cut and pasted from the site. I simply use thier spellings and definations. If there is an error - it's dictionary.com's fault. Teehehehe I just play with the words. But I'm glad you liked the story. Thank you for the review.

makaem2008.08.31 - 07:58AM20: Her Nineteenth WeekSigned
Sorry that should have been, fun to read.

Author's Response: I appreciate the review all the same. Thank you.

makaem2008.08.31 - 07:57AM20: Her Nineteenth WeekSigned
This has been so much for to read. Thank you for writing it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much - and you are most welcome. Thank you for the review.

Imhilien2008.08.31 - 01:23AM20: Her Nineteenth WeekSigned
That was a great story to read, thank you. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I really enjoy playing the Potter_Place Dictionary Drabble Challenge, and even though this boardered on 'it's not a drabble' it was so much fun to do. I have two more one-shots I'll post soon from the same challenge. Hope you like them too.

The Grim2008.08.20 - 05:55PM19: Her Eighteenth Week – She Gets What She WantedSigned
Yayyy! Love those moments of truth. Sweet. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

era19602008.08.20 - 01:25AM19: Her Eighteenth Week – She Gets What She WantedSigned
The story was very cute. I like the bit about Hermione kissing Severus' nose.

Author's Response: Thank you. Yes, considering that the size of his nose is what everyone comments on I thought that it would follow that it would be one of Hermione's fav features of his face. Heck, I'd eevn kiss it.

bonus tid bit!!

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Severus finished his rounds, delivering his potions. Jenson in the Apothecary in Diagon Alley had requested a large order of complicated potions and paid handsomely for the potions Severus delivered. He inquired after Hermione, smiling when he told Severus that her work was top quality, complimenting him on her training. Even Plitheroa at the Cartwright Apothecary on The Promenade had relented that Hermione’s potions were of an acceptable quality, requesting more of Hermione’s Alexindora Potion and Deliquesce Embrocation and paying the exuberant rate for which he charged her for them. Severus put the Galleons Hermione had earned with her potions in a separate pocket to give to her.

He walked down The Promenade slowly with a contented smile on his face. He entered Rourke McCloud’s Bijouterie, thinking he might just get Hermione a small token. The tall, thin wizard looked up from his workbench when Severus entered the shop. “Let me know if you’d like to see anything.”

Severus nodded as he walked along the displays and glass counters. Nothing struck him as being something she’d like or that suited her personality, until an object caught his eye. His palms started to sweat, his heart seemed to beat erratically, and there was a huge lump in his throat.

The shopkeeper appeared before him as if summoned. “Did ya find something then?” he asked.

“I’d like to see that one,” Severus said, pointing.

The shopkeeper handed it to Severus with a smile. “You’ve fine taste, sir.”

It was perfect: simple, elegant… expensive.

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