Reviews for Another Dream
snapeismyman | 2014.06.01 - 04:56PM | 42: Chapter 40: Epilogue | Signed |
"Sunlight blinded him briefly and when he looked at the gleaming train car windows after for a moment he thought he saw a scrawny, unloved little boy and a scared, lonely little girl reflected in the windows. But his vision cleared and it was only Severus and Hermione, middle-aged with gray temples and laugh lines and wild curls with a rounded belly. " - Perfect. I think you captured in this story how they could be together as a believable couple. Thank you for writing it.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much!! ♥♥ |
Jadecadence | 2014.06.01 - 03:04AM | 42: Chapter 40: Epilogue | Signed |
I like how you draw out the epilogue,... and that they spent so much time slowly enjoying their love. It's different. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much, that's lovely to hear!!!! :) |
mousemt | 2014.05.31 - 11:33PM | 42: Chapter 40: Epilogue | Signed |
Wonderful! Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you!! |
Cbear8 | 2014.05.31 - 08:56PM | 42: Chapter 40: Epilogue | Signed |
I loved this story!!! Thank you so much for sharing it :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! |
Logbrandur | 2014.05.31 - 04:36AM | 42: Chapter 40: Epilogue | Signed |
I thought about not reading the epilogue, since I hated J.K. Rowling's epilogue, but now I'm so glad I did read it.
It's lovely, as well as the rest of the story. I think it is a very rare occurrence that a fanfiction does not rely on an heavily action-based plot and is still so exciting to read. You did a very good job with that fic.
Author's Response: Thank you so very, very much!!! I'm not a fan of JK's epilogue, either. I'm so glad you liked my version of it!! :) Thank you for reading and enjoying the fic, and for such a lovely review. ♥ |
fynnsmom | 2014.05.31 - 01:04AM | 42: Chapter 40: Epilogue | Signed |
What a wonderful ending! I've enjoyed this story so much. I think you got the characters exactly right. Thank you for writing this. I'm so glad I was intrigued by your pen name and decided to check out your stories.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! My pen name was a random choice - how curious that it intrigued you!!! Thank you for all of your wonderful reviews. I really appreciate every single one!!! |
fynnsmom | 2014.05.31 - 12:49AM | 41: Chapter 39 part 2 | Signed |
That was so romantic. The wedding sounded beautiful. Nana sounds like a real character. I think Egypt would be a great place for a honeymoon--both the Muggle and Wizarding areas. Outside of the states, I've only been to Canada. I wonder if I'll ever travel to other countries. I've always wanted to go to France.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
I've only been to Canada/Mexico/USA, and I have to agree on wanting to go to France. My mom and sister recently went and say it's lovely. So jealous. |
Mikimoto | 2014.05.30 - 07:22PM | 42: Chapter 40: Epilogue | Signed |
Great ending and great story. Good for you to create and stick with it through all of your life changes. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I really appreciate your support as the story unfurled. |
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