Reviews for At the Beach
vze57t9j | 2009.05.13 - 12:58AM | 3: Lessons | Signed |
I love a man who speaks his mind and nothing speaks to me more than 'I want you in my bed.' My god this is an intriguing story!!! Please update soon! :D
Author's Response: There will be weekly updates. And thanks for liking Carlos's bluntness - I wanted him to be open with himself and others for a change. |
vze57t9j | 2009.05.13 - 12:46AM | 2: Tessa | Signed |
Is Severus' subconscious kicking in or is it a coincidence that Tessa reminds him of someone??? Hmmm...guess I'll have to wait and see. Lovely story! :D
Author's Response: I'll update regularly, about once a week. I hope you can wait long enough to see the riddles unraveled ;-) |
vze57t9j | 2009.05.13 - 12:37AM | 1: The Winegrower | Signed |
Great beginning! I love that Severus is a winegrower, and that he has a new life and friends. :D
Author's Response: Making him a winegrower seemed a logical thing at the time - I live next to a vineyard. Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
sqHPfan | 2009.05.10 - 11:17AM | 3: Lessons | Signed |
this is a lovely story, different and mysterious. I can't wait to see where it will take us . . . .
How often do you manage to update? (I just found it)
Author's Response: Usually, I update once a week - the story is finished, and I'll try not to forget posting it. Thanks for liking and reviewing! |
Half Blood Outcast | 2009.05.09 - 01:22AM | 3: Lessons | Signed |
oh this is definitely gettin got be very intriguing!! can't wait til the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Next chapter should be up in a few minutes. Thanks for reviewing! |
Jong_Kahn | 2009.05.08 - 10:31PM | 3: Lessons | Signed |
In this day and age, would a good mother really leave her two young children alone on the beach while she took a swim with someone she still didn't know very well?
Author's Response: Well, this mother is a witch, and although I haven't said so explicitly (and honestly, didn't think about it at the time) she surely has a tracking spell on the kids. Save to go swimming, especially because she's falling for the stranger. |
mashenka | 2009.05.08 - 10:20PM | 3: Lessons | Signed |
I love that your characters remain true to the books, despite the removed location. Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: Update in a few minutes ;-) I tried to keep this as much canon compliant as possible, despite the blond hair and the tanned skin. Thanks for reviewing! |
ladyjulian | 2009.05.08 - 10:09PM | 3: Lessons | Signed |
An intriguing and vivid story - and the bracelet will be relevant - won't it?
Author's Response: *grin* Yes, it is relevant, but it will take another few chapters until I will let you know what it is all about. Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
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