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Reviews for At the Beach

Loyd19572009.06.06 - 10:33AM7: RecognitionSigned
It looks like an ending of an old life for both. I feel that they need to go back and realize how they feel and end what they have with their other lives and maybe then get back together

Author's Response: Hmmm, Carlos certainly has ended his old life quite a while ago, and he doesn't want to stop being a winegrower. And Tessa - well, for her ending her marriage would mean to lose her children. Dilemma for both of them. Next chapter will be up on Friday. Thanks for reviewing!

vze57t9j2009.06.06 - 05:39AM7: RecognitionSigned
I'm glad the cats out of the bag. Now they have a chance to build on what they've started and make it into something long term. Even if it takes a while to get things figured out with the kids and such. Everybody deserves a chance at happiness. Great chapter!

Author's Response: It was about time that they recognised each other. And the ball is in Hermione's field now - her decision where she wants this to go, if she wants sth like this at all. Thanks for reviewing!

vze57t9j2009.06.06 - 05:23AM6: Conversations in the DarkSigned
Oh boy, it figures Ron would burst in on the scene just when the lemons were nice and juicy. Well, at least Carlos now knows why her hair is wrong. Great chapter!

Author's Response: That, and why she's so sad. Or was sad. Well, currently, she is sad again ;-) More soon, and thanks for reviewing!

vze57t9j2009.06.06 - 05:09AM5: ExcursionSigned
Lovely chapter! The decision to allow himself to fall deeper must be costing Carlos a little of his sanity every day, but I'm so glad that he did. The reunion of the three was a nice touch, as well. :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much, dear!

justme2009.06.06 - 03:30AM7: RecognitionSigned
SO many options....salivating for more of this plot!!!

Author's Response: More soon; I do hope you'll like the next chapter!

agnes_grey2009.06.06 - 02:59AM7: RecognitionSigned
Love it love it love it love it love it!!!

Author's Response: *beams* Thank you!

hedgehog2009.06.05 - 10:42PM7: RecognitionSigned
Please, please, please don't have them wait another 10 years until the kids go off to school and such for them to reunite. That would be the worst. I'd rather he secretly knock off Ron and never tell her. A happy medium solution, of course, would be best. :) Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: *lol* Now that's a solution I hadn't thought of. But no, sorry, no one will knock off Ron. They'll have to find an other way ;-) Thanks so much for reviewing!

barbied0112009.06.05 - 10:35PM7: RecognitionSigned
Wow. I'm so excited it's not over but I have to say, that would have been a great ending. I can't wait til next weekend. :)

Author's Response: Sorry, dear, but the recipient of this story, the lovely notsosaintly, wouldn't have approved of this ending ;-) Thanks for reviewing!

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