Reviews for At the Beach
cutemara | 2009.09.12 - 05:28PM | 13: Epilogue | Signed |
That was absolutely lovely! I would have loved to see how Hugo and Rose reacted when the found out about Luca and their mother's other life!
Author's Response: Well, as this story was nearly completely told from Carlos's POV, I figured I couldn't show that part. Plus, I already had the feeling of having a bit too many children in the story ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing, dear! |
robotnik1985 | 2009.09.07 - 01:38PM | 13: Epilogue | Signed |
Beautiful story. There were a few moments when I almost cried myself stupid.
Although it made me mad when you called them by the other names. it fitted the story, really, and I could understand why both would like to leave their past with the old names and start a new one, better. It was symbolic, but still... Severus as Carlos...
Many years ago I bought my baby sister a little rucksack in shape of a ram. 'Carlos' was printed on a label. I don't know if it was a name of the company or a name for the design, but my sis always called her ram-rucksack Carlos. So maybe I'm just prejudiced ;)
Thank you for sharing the story, I had wonderful time reading it.
Hugs,
Belle
Author's Response: *lol* A rucksack called Carlos, now doesn't that fit...
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Admittedly, it felt odd at the beginning to write them so differently from their "usual" self, changing their appearances and their names, too. But it was necessary, at least for this story. *hugs back* |
Mistress Sorcha | 2009.08.29 - 10:25AM | 13: Epilogue | Signed |
I enjoyed this story very much. You're right, it was a very unique way to bring these two together, but that made it all the more special. I came close to crying tears of joy multiple times; everything was in character, yet so sweet at the same time. You wove a beautiful story, and I thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Author's Response: *beams* So glad you liked it! Although I posted it elsewhere first and got good reviews, I'm always a bit nervous to post it here ;-) And special thanks for calling them in character despite the changes I made to their appearances! |
jarjarbettye | 2009.08.22 - 02:41PM | 13: Epilogue | Signed |
I thought this story was absolutely wonderful. I didn't get to right this review when I acutally finished it, sometimes life gets in your way. I use to wait for this story every Friday, their just not the same anymore. Please let their be a sequel.
Author's Response: Thanks for liking the Fridays better just because of my story! I wrote it last year, and I must admit, I thought about a sequel, but frankly, I don't have the time right now to do it. Be assured that they stay together and Luca grows up as a happy girl. And many, many thanks for taking the time to review although you've read and finished the story a while ago. |
SnaperSnipe | 2009.08.19 - 01:25AM | 13: Epilogue | Signed |
When I first read the first few paragraphs of the first chapter (I said "first" thrice, haha) I was skeptical about the story. But now I've fallen in love with it! Amazingly written! Kudos to you for this incredible story.
Author's Response: Sceptical, eh? Well, I'm glad you continued writing! My beta warned me about strong reactions from readers because I changed Snape's appearance that much and Hermione's, too, so I am really happy you liked it nevertheless. |
Majenta | 2009.07.28 - 04:58PM | 13: Epilogue | Signed |
Such a lovely story - it's the second time I've read it and I'm sure I'll read it again before too long. Would love some sort of sequel at some stage.
Well done and keep up the great work.
Author's Response: I thought about a sequel, but don't have the time right now. Maybe in the winter... Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
hoppy_1966 | 2009.07.26 - 11:48PM | 1: The Winegrower | Signed |
Nice so far. I don't think it matters what age you are, unhappiness can come anytime! Children are a blessing though.
Author's Response: A total "yes!" to both statements! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! |
Cardinaln57 | 2009.07.26 - 10:16PM | 13: Epilogue | Signed |
Excellent story. Extremely well crafted and executed.
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you! |
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