Reviews for At the Beach
Mr_Flit | 2009.06.26 - 09:53PM | 10: Castles Built on Sand | Signed |
I knew it I knew it I knew it!!!!!
Can't WAIT to see what happens next.
Author's Response: :-)
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Mr_Flit | 2009.06.26 - 09:53PM | 10: Castles Built on Sand | Signed |
I knew it I knew it I knew it!!!!!
Can't WAIT to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Next update next Friday. Thanks so much for reviewing! |
Loyd1957 | 2009.06.26 - 09:14PM | 10: Castles Built on Sand | Signed |
Dun, dun, dun.....pregnant. Okay, that throws a wrench into the works. What will she do now?
Author's Response: She tries to find out what happened and how it happened ;-) Thanks so much for reviewing! |
hedgehog | 2009.06.26 - 06:28PM | 10: Castles Built on Sand | Signed |
Thanks for the update. How did she let that happen? Looking forward to how she gets this past Ron...your sure she's not going to kill him? :) Just kidding.
Author's Response: There is a reason for her pregnancy ;-) And no, sorry, she won't kill him. Thanks so much for reviewing! |
Tessa85 | 2009.06.26 - 06:05PM | 10: Castles Built on Sand | Signed |
I really love this story. Great descriptions of their visits together and Carlos's home. I wonder how she will cope with the pregnancy.
Author's Response: His home is in the story solely because my beta demanded a bit more background ;-) Thanks so much for reviewing! |
verasuspense | 2009.06.26 - 05:07PM | 10: Castles Built on Sand | Signed |
Knowing Hermione, abortion is not an option. I suppose Ron will scream and yell about her adultery - just imagine if he knew who with ! - as though he doesn't shag every Quiddich groupie he can during his absences. Oh, and that should be "steal half a day with Carlos", not 'steel'. And I think 'chicken' should be 'chickens'.
Author's Response: She'll definitely think about an abortion - the pregnancy wasn't planned, and she's shocked. It could ruin everything.
Will check on the errors - thanks for pointing them out. And thanks for reviewing! |
sqHPfan | 2009.06.26 - 04:52PM | 10: Castles Built on Sand | Signed |
how wonderful to come home from work and to find the next chapter. I really, really love this story. It is interesting that Carlos was able to shed his snarky personality with his actual name. This is getting really interesting. will she have seduce Ron so she can pretend that this is his child? Rose and Hugo will only be nine and seven by the time this baby will arrive, right? what a dilemma. But Hermione is not the brightest witch for nothing. She will find a solution. And I can't wait to find out what Carlos' reaction will be to becoming a Father!
Author's Response: If she tells him. If she doesn't decide to abort the child. If nothing else happens in between, and at the moment, she doesn't even know how it could happen. Oh, and who sais it's not Ron's child?
I'll update soon. Thanks for reviewing! |
Jong_Kahn | 2009.06.26 - 04:09PM | 10: Castles Built on Sand | Signed |
So tell me how "the brightest witch of her age" neglected her birth control. Or was this an "accidentally on purpose" kind of thing? In love or not, people are either careful, or they aren't. Did neither of them think of this? I'm just asking....(And I did enjoy the chapter. Very much!)
Author's Response: It's neither. They were careful; after all, they are not lovesick teenagers. Guess you'll have to wait for a week before you find out ;-) |
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