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| Helena | 2009.05.16 - 04:52AM | 4: Dinner and a Walk | Signed |
| I'm really enjoying this story, I think it's horrid how Hermione's life with Ron has turned out, especially when she has such potential. I wonder what it is Ron does, and I wonder how her hair is blond - a disguise, or part of her look now? Her children are clearly undisguised. I love that she recognises something in Severus that is clearly "him", despite the disguise and unusual setting. I'm waiting for Severus to put a name to a face, and then I'd like to see him just say "Hermione Granger" and see what her reaction is. I thought the scene at dinner was lovely, very genuine and the children, complete with chicken, were wonderful. I hope you realise that after Hermiones miserable description of her life I have now concocted a fantasy world where she and the children live with "Carlos" at the vineyard, doing lots of family things together and generally being unbearably happy! I expect you to deliver on this fantasy, or something close to it!!! Keep up the good work, this is a lovely, well written, unique story. Author's Response: Anything else I can do for you, like shift the world a bit to the left? *grin* Let me tell you that this story was a present for a friend; this friend really likes happy endings. I hope that will soothe your fears of upcoming angst and terror - there won't be much of that ;-) Thanks so much for reviewing! | |||
| animaltalker | 2009.05.16 - 02:16AM | 4: Dinner and a Walk | Signed |
| lovely story, hoping for more Author's Response: More soon - I update on a weekly basis. Thanks for reviewing! | |||
| Shizuka | 2009.05.16 - 12:23AM | 4: Dinner and a Walk | Signed |
| I'm so happy when I see the new chapters for this story! It's so wonderful; I forget sometimes I'm reading about Severus and Hermione. Author's Response: That was my sole intention - give them a new life, a new identity, so they can find each other without the past's burdens. Thanks for reviewing! | |||
| sqHPfan | 2009.05.15 - 05:32PM | 4: Dinner and a Walk | Signed |
| this story leaves me breathless with it's beauty and honesty. I am thrilled to know that you finished it. really lovely! Author's Response: The story has about 12 chapters and an epilogue; I will try to regularly update on Fridays. Thanks for reading and reviewing! | |||
| sevspet | 2009.05.15 - 05:19PM | 4: Dinner and a Walk | Signed |
| Great chapter! I love how you are developing the relationship. Love the inner struggles of both. Can't wait for me! Author's Response: More towards the end of next week - I will try to regularly update on Fridays. Yeah, they struggle, and it will take a while before one will realise the truth. Thanks for reviewing! | |||
| maygangrace | 2009.05.15 - 05:13PM | 4: Dinner and a Walk | Signed |
| this is FANTASTIC (= i just love it Author's Response: Thank you! | |||
| shuldham | 2009.05.15 - 04:42PM | 4: Dinner and a Walk | Signed |
| Have I told you yet how absolutely beautiful this story is? Author's Response: Even if, I must admit I cannot hear it enough *g* Thanks so much for liking it and reviewing, too! | |||
| KuroNeko_13 | 2009.05.15 - 08:29AM | 3: Lessons | Signed |
| This is so good *awed* Really, I absolutely love your stories! Author's Response: Thank you, dear! | |||
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