Reviews for At the Beach
barbied011 | 2009.06.12 - 12:28PM | 8: Decisions | Signed |
I loved the interaction between Hermione and her mother. Can't wait for the next update. :)
Author's Response: Given the fact that in this chapter there is no Carlos, I'm really grateful that you still liked it ;-) Thanks a lot for reviewing! |
Helena | 2009.06.09 - 03:56PM | 7: Recognition | Signed |
What a chapter. At the beginning, the confrontation and revealing. Then suddenly, it's all over ! A happy holiday speeding by, and they're on a plane home, and Severus is left with a broken heart. This story has always progressed a little faster than I'm used to, but it also has never disappointed. Therefore, I'm hoping that you have a killer chapter coming up where everything's going to turn out fine. I'm imagining the children rejecting Ron's attention and singing Carlos' virtues; Severus writing Hermione a letter declaring how he's missing her; Hermione researching custody laws so that she can leave Ron and elope with Severus... Put me out of my misery?
Author's Response: *g* You're the first who says the story progresses fast - most of the others said the pace is slow. There are some chapters left, but let me warn you: this is as much canon compliant as possible. The next chapter will be up on Friday; hope you'll like what I come up with. |
JamesandLily4ever | 2009.06.07 - 08:44PM | 7: Recognition | Signed |
How is this not the end?! Is there a sequel out there or something?! *cries* I don't want it to end...!!!!! *whines, but soon stops* I actually like how well thought out this fic looks like. It made me smile a few times (I mean, Severus smiling just because Hermione changed into a more happier, full of self-esteem kinda person thanks to him!!!). :D & that's why I'm giving you a straight up 10/10. And I'll probably be on the lookout for something that happens after this... *hums about before clicking the 'submit' button...=]*
Author's Response: Dear, the next chapter will be up on Friday ;-) This story is not over yet, and I thought I should let my readers know. The story is a gift for the wonderful nss, and I promised her not to break her heart. Thanks for reviewing! |
Aflibble | 2009.06.06 - 09:17PM | 7: Recognition | Signed |
I want more, but even if you had not promised more this chapter would be a good ending, although I am so happy to see that there will be more coming. this story is so well written and moves at such a perfect pace.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing - it means a much, knowing that my readers like what I came up with. |
Tangerine Dream | 2009.06.06 - 06:20PM | 7: Recognition | Signed |
This is so wonderful!! I do hope they work things out.
Author's Response: Let's put it this way: this story is a gift for a friend (the wonderful nss) and I wouldn't break her heart ;-) Thanks for reviewing! |
Tangerine Dream | 2009.06.06 - 05:07PM | 4: Dinner and a Walk | Signed |
What a wonderful concept and a fascinating story. I really like it. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: The next chapter will be up on Friday, as usual. Thanks for reviewing! |
Veritas51 | 2009.06.06 - 11:35AM | 7: Recognition | Signed |
This is absolutely beautiful! It has a mystical quality to it, and the slow progression of the story is perfect.
Author's Response: *beams* Thank you so much! |
ChristyRae75 | 2009.06.06 - 11:32AM | 7: Recognition | Signed |
Ah, so bittersweet and lovely. I'm really hoping there's a happy ending here. Can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: Another few chapters to come, the next one will be up on Friday. Thanks for reviewing! |
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