Reviews for The Other Law
| Gwenog Jones | 2007.07.01 - 09:10PM | 3: Kneazles Make Trouble | Signed |
| I really enjoyed Severus' emotions and thought processes in this chapter. I think that you wrote him remarkably well and very much in character. Great job! |
| oscarxena | 2007.07.01 - 08:55PM | 3: Kneazles Make Trouble | Signed |
| I guess Severus never heard the phrase that when you assume you make an ass of you and me. He's certainly heading down a path that will give him multiple rude awakenings. I can't wait! Lovely job with this story. Please update soon. |
| TCFellows | 2007.07.01 - 07:33PM | 3: Kneazles Make Trouble | Signed |
| VERY VERY GOOD! |
| Maddie | 2007.07.01 - 07:08PM | 3: Kneazles Make Trouble | Signed |
| For a man who needed to be married he certainly seems to be resisting all the way to the marriage bed. Perhaps Hermione will have to seduce him. That should be amusing. |
| June W | 2007.07.01 - 03:57PM | 3: Kneazles Make Trouble | Signed |
| Hmm, Crookshanks is definitely being naughty here (territorial?), so I hope he improves. I hope Hermione figures out his plan to have the marriage annulled, as she seems pretty smart about his actions. Go, Hermione! And thanks for the new chapter. |
| Horserider | 2007.06.26 - 08:21PM | 2: Turn the Frown Upside-Down | Signed |
| Good interaction all around! Just entirely too short! More please! |
| kittykat91419 | 2007.06.26 - 11:01AM | 2: Turn the Frown Upside-Down | Signed |
| Very cute. I like Hermione as you portray her. I don't have a lot to tell, but I've enjoyed the story and hope to read more soon! |
| raj | 2007.06.26 - 02:26AM | 2: Turn the Frown Upside-Down | Signed |
| Great chapter - I can't wait to read more. Lovely work! |
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