Reviews for The Other Law
Snape_dreamer | 2007.06.25 - 02:06PM | 2: Turn the Frown Upside-Down | Signed |
do I smell a new twist in here. Very nice start and a bit funny, which is good. |
sunsethill | 2007.06.25 - 01:05PM | 2: Turn the Frown Upside-Down | Signed |
You've made a great start with this story. You are hitting all the favorite elements in a believable, fun way. I especially liked Hermione's line that Severus didn't seem like a "pot pie kind of person." |
Maggie | 2007.06.25 - 01:05PM | 2: Turn the Frown Upside-Down | Signed |
Well done. |
Victoria Brandon | 2007.06.25 - 12:43PM | 2: Turn the Frown Upside-Down | Anonymous |
I like this twist on the MLC. I'm interested to find out what it was that made our dear professor so upset... keep up the good work!
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RachelW | 2007.06.21 - 03:53PM | 1: Impossible or Just Improbable? | Signed |
Oh, this is a hilarious start! I love it, almost the Marriage Law Challenge in reverse, and this time it's Hermione who comes to Snape's rescue. The dialog was witty and I'm looking forward to reading future chapters. |
Darque Hart | 2007.06.21 - 02:23PM | 1: Impossible or Just Improbable? | Signed |
Super! Another silly Law story! Even if it is the 'other law' ... it starts of like a story that I will love reading. Don't disappoint us all by disappearing now that you've tantalized us with this beginning.
Author's Response: A second chapter is already in the queue. |
amy skydancer | 2007.06.21 - 10:16AM | 1: Impossible or Just Improbable? | Signed |
and who is the dunderhead that drempt up this lovely law!!! lol.... bet they're going to be sorry! ( in a sing-sond voice) Love this story, can't wait for more!!! |
dryade | 2007.06.21 - 02:57AM | 1: Impossible or Just Improbable? | Signed |
Great start! And nice dialogue. Can't wait to read more. |
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